Lycando

Hey there! I really liked this! It's complex in it's nature as a story and there's that moral at the end of the story which I might add, was pretty ...

Hey there! I liked this piece because it has it's own uniqueness. And your style of writing is very special too. Talking about the desert like it's a living thing ...

Hey there! First of what does this story touch on? Does it touch the relationship between Jae and his friend or between Ken and Mina? There seems to be two ...

Hey there! Reviewing this from my phone XD So I have read the previous chapter and I think this continuation is very well done. Micah's character comes out much more ...

Hey there! I find this story to be pretty interesting, and the idea of only realising that Valarie was deaf only at the end made the beginning of the chapter ...

Hey there! I like this story! It's a nice piece of flash fiction and it's also powerful in words. You used quite a lot of description in the first few ...

Oh Starleene! My Team! Go Red! :D So...pretty nice read here! The only thing is the first paragraph is a huge chunk of text that can be avoided! You need ...

Hey there! My oh my...this is indeed interesting. You're a house! I can't say how interesting this is turning out to be. I can now understand the previous chapters much ...

Hey there! Now this part is where it gets weird. Why are you talking about the woman visiting the characters master? I would have thought you would be talking more ...

Hey there! First of all I like the way you write here! It's full of imagery and the flow is smooth! It's a great piece to read! It was night ...

Hey there! So as I was saying in earlier reviews, the problem here is the clarity. There are alot of characters involved in this story, namely Alpha, Beta, Delta, and ...

Hey there! I really like how this is progressing. In terms of storyline and the different animals and their behavior. This story has the potential to turn out really great! ...

Hey there! How should I say this? This story doesn't really have an interesting plot or concept. It's basically a series of events you're describing, and the reader doesn't want ...

Hey there! So, in comparison with chapter one of this story, I still don't feel the excitement here I would have expected. The character of Elijah is really monotonous, it ...

Hey there! Well first of all, I have to say this story wasn't as interesting as I expected. What was happening with the girl? Was she asleep or sick? Tell ...