Lycando

Oh my...I really have to admit when I first saw this I was a little turned off by the extremely long story. But I started reading, and soon I get ...

Hey there, Lycando here to review! First off, and I have to agree with gossipgirl, the paragraphs, trust me I had to learn forward in my chair to actually read ...

Wow, back with the third part huh? Well then here I am once again! :D I really enjoy this. I mean, from the first part to this one now. It ...

Hey there it's Lycando to review! First of all, I want to say that I really enjoy your story! Short as it may be, it does give me a clear ...

Hello there, megefford! Lycando here for a review! Wonderful story you have here! I can feel the emotions running, of young love and the hardships of being a teenager. I ...

Well, it's Lycando here, as requested! Seeing as this is based upon your life story, I shall be sensitive. First off, you do have a very interesting family history, perhaps ...

Hello there it's Lycando here to review! :) This story has great potential, the starting captured my attention, like a wild chase through the woods. There are quite a few ...

Right, Lycando here to review! I really liked this story, and I would like to see more! :) First off, the knight's name is Gareth right? However you used the ...

Hello there, I see this is the second part of the story! Time for a review! :) Time for a little nitpicking. The first sentence "As I awake", it doesn't ...

Hey there it's Lycando! Two different characters huh? Not too sure who's the MC here since you used first person on both of them. I like this story very much ...

Hey there Caylleen, I'm here to review your work! Just got to say that I love this story, even though it's pretty short. However there are some cliche phrases in ...

Hey there, Lycando here, as requested! First off, I really love this story, especially the twist at the ending. It's a unique story that has an original storyline to it. ...

Hey there CreativeIntentions! It's Lycando here to review! :) First of, even though this is pretty short, I'm loving this story already, and I may just decide to review the ...

Hey there! Lycando here to review! First off, nitpicks! "Leaves, damp, trees, pine needles crunch underneath his feet. He dives into a clearing and rolls feet over head. He grabs ...

Hello there! I'll be here to review your work! :D "fingers just scathing the surface." I think you meant to say "scratching" right? Scathing wouldn't sound right here :O "I ...