Glimmers of sunlight entered the room once thickened in darkness, Zara awoke to her long, black hair cascading down her back in a tangled mess. She admired her flawless face in her body-length mirror. Zara had pale, white as snow skin and plump lips along with her gorgeous rosy red cheeks.
Zara began scouring her closets for an outfit to wear for the schoolday, she decided to go with a custom made outfit fabricated in polyester. Uncomfortable, but flashy. Surprisingly, what mesmerized everybody most about Zara wasn't her outfit choices, but her eyes. Her eyes could make any boy, or girl feel a strong sexual attraction towards her.
"Zara, get to school or you'll be late again!!!", bellowed her mother from the first floor.
Zara obeyed her mother and left her qauint home, isolated from the rest of the town called Newsburry. Zara always took her time walking to school, you'd probably assume that she'd be smelling the blossoming flowers, or absorbing up all of the warmth of the sunlight. Well, you're wrong, Zara was luring in her prey, it was breakfast time already.
{Eve's [P.O.V}
I quickly threw on a plain brown tee shirt and a fresh pair of overalls, clutched my vintage bag in one hand, and a plastic red cup filled with orange juice in the other. Quickly, I settled onto my bike, and raced towards Newburry High.
Nearly, almost falling off my bike from colliding with an elderly crossing guard, I saw her-the most evil creature to ever set foot on this earth, Zara. Zara was the type of girl who got what she wanted with a flutter of her long, curled eyelashes, but there was something very unusual about her, something that most people wouldn't have the ability to see.
Abruptly, I set down my bike on the side wall of a mountainous office building, and crouched down to watch Zara's actions. Everything seemed normal at first, but those eyes, those insanely dark purple eyes, what human had that eye color!? Now, most people would say I a lesbian, a stalker, but I'm not. I'm a young, teenage journalist who wants everyone to open there eyes to the dark, evil people in the town of Newburry. Quickly, I whipped my head behind a mailbox and focused on Zara from the upright corner of my eye.
Then, I saw it, I saw her guide three teenage boys who were interested in something a little bit lower than her face follow her into an alleyway.
{Zara's P.O.V}
I walked down the hill and finally made it into the center of town within approximately only 3 to 4 minutes, but who gives a shit about time? I began cautiously making my decisions on who looked tasty for a good meal to start off my day. Now, before you jump to conclusions, no I am NOT a cannibal, I don't harvest people and then barbecue them in my basement, I just suck the living daylights out of them.
Anyways, back to the point, I finally found three guys who seemed familiar, oh yes, I remember them now!! Jason, Dylan, and Harvey. Finally, the most tiring part, I had to put my eyes to work.
"C'mon Zara, focus, focus...", I set my eyes down toward the trio and focused until my brain began to ache. Yes! Succesfully, the boys were under my trance, they were basically zombified and didn't know what was going on in the blur of the fast moving world around them.
Hesitantly, I made sure that nobody was looking at us four and I lured them into the alleyway. Soon enough, like a lion would pounce hungrily on a zebra, I kissed the first guy- Harvey. Well, I guess the best way possible to describe it would be a kiss, but in reality, I was just sucking out his soul. It took me about 30, or 45 seconds to do, but with a pro like me, I always got the job done. Next up, was Dylan and then Jason.
I slowly watched as Harvey's face went blank and his eyes rolled back into his head, he fell to the ground and lay there, motionless. Next up, I wrapped my arms around Dylan and forcefully pressed my lips against his. This routine was monotonous, but what else was I going to "eat"?
{Eve's P.O.V}
I stood there, staring in awe at what had just occured. I assume that Zara had tried to be sneaky about hiding in the alleyway, I mean, this block wasn't exactly bustling with pedestrians. Anyways, I fumbled with my camera, trying to whip it out of my bag, but by the time I had it out, lens off and everything, Zara's job had been done.
I stood there, zombified, I could still not believe what had just happened. Dylan, Jason, and Harvey were all really nice guys, goofballs, but still nice. I slowly rode my bike to school, just thinking about this sickened me. I felt like throwing up all over the place, or at least telling someone!!! But who would believe me? I'm a freak as most people would say...
Walking into the entrance of the schoolbuilding, I peered through the hallway and watched Zara walk to homeroom, licking her lips. I hope she only feasted on boys, or else I'd eventually be screwed. Honestly, I've always had a hunch that Zara doesn't exactly care for me, but not everyone's going to, right? Thank god she doesn't like me though, or I'd have a big problem with her consuming half of our school...
{Zara's P.O.V}
I tossed my hair onto my back and walked to school like nothing had happened, I could've sworn I saw that freak, Eve peek at me with those nasty ass squinty, brown eyes, but whatever. She wouldn't hurt a microscopic fly!!! Anyways, I've had other people catch me in mealtime before, I just attack them when they don't see it coming...
I'm not always a rude person, never really, but if I see someone or something that could typically harm my kind in away way, it's time for me to go into predator mode. I've never exactly cared much for Eve, but now she's shown a sign of curiousity towards my secret, and I'll do whatever it takes to protect it...
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Two different characters huh? Not too sure who's the MC here since you used first person on both of them. I like this story very much though, and I'm very interested in Zara, who exactly is she? Yes you leave me hanging there, but I supposed you'll explain in later parts won't you?
The part about Eve hating Zara makes me think the two of them will have some form on conflict later, yes? Also Zara seems to be the dressy type here, while Eve wears the normal t shirt and shorts. Two very contradicting characters indeed.
Moving on, the only actual critique I have about this was what Dylan and Jason were doing while Harvey was being "kissed" by Zara. If it took 30-45 seconds, were they just standing there waiting? Or were they moving around in a trance? You didn't really explain how they were put into a trance either, did they have to make eye contact with her?
I know it's the pretty small details I'm concerned with, but description always helps to paint a clearer picture in any story. Hope my review helped!
Interesting storyline. Makes you wonder what is going to happen. Well, all stories should do that, shouldn't they? It's the good ones that draw you in and make you want to keep reading. Anyways, make sure to edit your writing, because I saw a few typos. But this is good writing and I think you should continue with it. Can't wait to see what happens next.