LucytheBrave

Hi! I might be crazy, but it feels like this poem is about Snow White? At least, thats the story I felt (Though it may be because you literally said ...

HELLO! First of all your poem was really good, i definitely liked it. I also have a real passion for this type of poem??If thats what it is? The whole ...

That was amazing! This is not the kind of thing you want to read first thing in the morning, because now I'm going to be thinking about it all day. ...

I genuinely flipped out when I read this. It's so beautiful. I love how sporadic and disorganized it is. It really get's the feeling across, that nostalgic, almost devastating tone. ...

This is beautiful. I love the way you maintained a rhythm without rhyme or any particular pattern. Every poem has a way of flowing, and yours is particularly interesting. I ...

I can relate to this on so many levels, It's not even funny. I just love it. I love the phrasing and the rhythm, and the way it's not too ...

OML I love this! First of all, you used advanced vocabulary, but not out of context. Instead of someone trying to make them self seem smarter, your use of the ...

Beautiful! This poem is excellent. It poses a question that can connect with people from all over, people who've been affected by war. The lines don't rhyme within the stanzas, ...

Oh my gods! This poem is so amazing. I actually relate to it alot, since I have a ton of poems i don't publish because i don't think they are ...

Omg!!!*squeals* This poem is really brilliant. I love that you used a freeform style. It suits the poem really well, and kindof shows how nervous the woman is about opening ...

This poem is SO good. I really like it! However, I do have a few points of improvement. The first thing is that the poem doesn`t have a steady rhythm. ...

WOW! I think this poem is good for the summertime. It may be a bit strange, but it creates a happy mood, a sort of carefree, do-whatever type mood. I ...

This poem is really amazing. I like the way you used adjectives to really paint a picure of what you see. I also think that using long, flowy(!) sentences really ...

OMG. This poem is amazing. It`s not totally up front, but I can still see the meaning behind it. It`s confusing at first, but you have to read it multiple ...

OMG I LOVE THIS! A quick review though. I think instead of having your lines numbered, you could split the lines into stanzas. That would make it more poem-y and ...