Lucia

Hiya! Poems can have many different meanings, and can be construed in many different ways from person to person and from author to reader. Poetry has a way of relating ...

Hey DivergentDemigod, (can I call you "Demi"? :D) The idea of this piece was really cool! I found the letter to be very thought provoking, and I particularly enjoyed that ...

Hello there! I take it you have never cried in public. :) I'm not sure that I can relate to the feelings expressed in this poem. Sure, when people I ...

Hi there! Having been in similar situations myself, I can relate to your work. In my case, anger went rampant, but eventually led to gross sobbing in a closet. As ...

Hey BlueDaisy2018, and welcome to YWS! This was a pretty well written piece! In fact, I don't have much to critique, so I can pretty much only make suggestions. ;) ...

Hi Stegosaurus, and welcome to YWS! Let's get started, shall we? After reading the first few sentences, I started to imagine Lisa's voice reading it aloud. I really like the ...

I always love a good Robin Hood story, even if it sounds like all the others. But yours doesn't sound like all the others! There's something about changing the character's ...

I'm really excited to read a story about these two! I'm not really a Jelsa fan, or any of that, but I've always wondered what it would be like when ...

This was.... interesting. I noticed, first of all, that your piece had striking similarities to an anime called Sword Art Online. :D If you meant to do this, you should ...

Hi there, speakerskat! Your poem had a bit of a calming effect on me. Probably had something to do with the dreamlike quality and the pleasant imagery you used. :) ...

Seeing that you're new, I just want to say welcome to YWS!! I hope you like it here! I like the darkness in the first part of this poem. Not ...

Hahaha..... I knew that was coming. ;) I really liked this a lot! I found it very funny. I also find myself slightly wondering if the obsession could perhaps be... ...

So, I suppose that there are many things I could take out of this, but I'm gonna say that the main gist of it is this: People are capable of ...

This was awesome!!!! I don't know if this was meant to be comical, but I noticed all detective cliches in here, even just in the first paragraph! (ex. dark, secluded ...

Alright! Andrew's section..... dark as always, and full of emotion. Some of which seemed to conflict, but that just proves what a complex and somewhat confusing character he is. So, ...