Lovexorxhatred

What's with the big middle paragraph? Not trying to be mean. :). " She says she wants to run away, wants to see the places she's never heard of. She ...

Heehee, hey it's me. x) Um it was a little weird 'cause in stanza one you never rhymed! :O. But who am I to talk? Haha. My rhyme scheme is ...

It was like a mini story which was cool, the punctuation and spelling may of been a bit out of place. For instance in the last stanza it was "So ...

Oi, hello this is just LovexorxHatred! I thought the extra little words added were a sort of dramatic flair. And your title is just fine. I do believe though if ...

It had a queer air to it. Not in a bad way though. I found the lack of space between stanzas harder for me to flow with it. xD xoxo ...

Heh a lot about liquor. xD Nice job though. Your representations are very clear and the point is throughout the poem. Very well done! I felt it was a story, ...

A very well done poem. :) Not be a downer just a bit of repetition of the word mocking. :P But I love the birds you chose!!! Each one symbolizes ...

Hi. I couldn't find the follow button. D:. Gah. But anyone this is deep. :) But I has such good intent. I can see the depression in your writing. Just ...

The similes you used created a good sense of understanding. Do you love eggs? x3 Haha. Anyway I think it was really nice, and you may of made some grammar ...

:( Yeah it is pretty messed up. To even be "attractive" change comes into place. How weird! Can we not be beautiful in our own ways. Or even just be ...

I think this elaborates on what we all have been thinking upon celebrities. A little lengthy but a good read! I like how you've incorporated a way to get the ...