LosPresidentes

Thanks for the review xD

I hate tooting my own horn.... Right.. But you could just give my older stuff a read xD

wow, that's messed up. O_O'

This is hilarious, yet somewhat offensive, but in a payful demeanor, I'd suggest something but I'd ruin it. So, Honestly, Don't do it again... Lol.. But, it was .... Yeah. ...

it is what it is A memory is the moment that lasts forever.

Short, sweet and to the point IT could use a bit of spice, but not to distract from the monotone dark view of the piece. I also found the repetition ...

I wanted it to read like "and so with the wind, their is truth! XD using a possessive. Comparing the wind to a living being.

high five

Omg you understood the undertones?!

Well, it's a bite satirical, and seems rushed. xD IT doesn't seem like a poem, more like a school assignment. But it is quite amusing. Definite E for Effort =p ...

Powerful, very powerful.

because if its the same all the way throught it loses the emotion. Everything I write works this way. In motions. thet represent the Alpha and Omega

Brilliant!

Very witty, =3 Excellent show, Way better than anything I can do, so a comment must suffice.

... Sure.