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Hey, Gem. This poem... it's beautiful. The raw sorrow, the tremulous rhythm, and your excellent choice of words leave me nearly speechless. I felt the grief roll in waves off ...

Hey there, Sun! I hope you're having a good day wherever you are! To begin with, I quite enjoyed the tone and structure of this poem. There's a very distinct ...

Hey, Wolfe! Crikey, it's been AGES since I last reviewed anything. Forgive me if I slip up a little! So, the review. I actually have very little criticism to give, ...

Greetings, legacy! I hope you don't mind me calling you that. I'll be frank; I like the poem. It's quite simple, without deep meanings or hints of something other than ...

Hello there! I'm Lee. Welcome to the site! Anyway, you want suggestions and advice, so here I am. I'm also going to be completely honest with you about what I ...

Hello, fleural! It's nice to see a nature poem that personifies something rather well. Overall I did like the thought behind it and the descriptions, but there a couple of ...

Greetings, Paracosm! I'm Lee, and here to review your work! So, my first impression is that it's a very well thought and well executed poem. Your metaphors are very effective ...

Hello, Gem! It's been a while since you posted last. Glad to read, as always. So, my thoughts? Hard to say. On one hand, the lack of punctuation makes it ...

Hi, firemoons! I'm finally here to read the second chapter, and I have to say: great work! There's definitely some improvement from the last time, and you don't seem to ...

Hey there, Buranko! This is probably the third of your poems that I'm reviewing. I hope you don't mind! I'll get right to it. Like oceans said, it's interesting how ...

Hello, Buranko! I saw this while scrolling through the poetry section, and the title caught my eye. The poem itself didn't disappoint; it's a well-written piece with rich imagery and ...

Hello there! I'm Lee, and here to review your story. I'll begin by saying that this is good, really good. The beginning was quite well-written and thoroughly engaging, which compelled ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! Well, the title of this poem caught my eye right away, and I wasn't disappointed by the poem itself. It's a pretty good effort, and you ...

Hey, star. If this is something you and your parents are going through, I'm sorry. You can always dm me if you want to talk.

Hey, alliyah! Has nervous panic again I read it and listened simultaneously, and... Your voice is AMAZING. I didn't know you sing! It's high and sweet, kinda like birdsong. That ...