Hi Buranko!
I have a hard time reviewing poems (mainly because they are usually short) but this one was so beautiful, I had to review it.
There is such rich and almost elegant imagery, it captures perfectly what I think about the sea. I've never been able to describe how I feel about the sea before, so good job! One thing though, the line were you said,
"blue like a child's eye"
Isn't really correct, since there are other colors of eyes. But I get the point you were trying to get across. Also, @LittleLee said
"Water absorbs colours from the red part of the light spectrum, leaving only blue for our eyes to see."
although it is true, it doesn't feel like the question is childish. Mainly because a lot of people don't know why the sea is blue.
Anyway, this is probably the best poem I have ever read, thanks for writing this!
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