LittleLee

Hi, Grav! Hmm, starting off, interesting turn of events. The story is engaging and well-written, with no gaping grammatical or spelling mistakes. The plot also seems quite solid. The one ...

Hello! I'm here to review your poem. First of all, it's cute and short, making it an easy read. I liked the idea behind the poem as well; as a ...

Hey, Little's here to review! I'll start off with what I feel could be improved in the poem. Beautiful thing lies around us; This sounds a little weak. I'd suggest ...

Hey, Gem, I really like this poem! I can't criticise anything except the first two stanzas; in the first, the starting line is one thought and the next three lines ...

Hey, nice poem! I don't have anything to point out as flaws in this poem, except that some lines are way too big. That causes a negative visual impact on ...

Hey, Lee here for a review! I like this poem quite a lot. There are very few things I think can be changed a little, but I think that your ...

Hey! Okay. Nice story. I was slightly confused at first by how you kept saying "male" instead of "boy" or something, but then I read your first chapter and it ...

Hey, your artwork is really nice! It's interesting and quite mind-boggling to see. The only thing is, you need to be a little more specific as to which layer is ...

Okay, here I am to review! Before I begin, I would like to say that this story is quite interesting, but a little cliche. It follows the same arc of ...

Wow. Just... Wow. I can honestly tell you that this is one of the best and most straightforward poems I've read in a long time. While most poems that deal ...

Hey! Okay, it's a really nice and short essay. This is the first time I'm reviewing an essay, I think, so I hope I don't become too critical. If I ...

Hey, Lee's here for a review! The poem is good. It's something that most people can connect with and that's essential. I like your diction. Comparing your all-consuming pain to ...

Hey, here's that review! First of all, I really like the poem because I can relate to it on two levels; as the lover and the loved. And that's what ...

Hey, Little's here for a review! I really loved this poem. To me, it touches several things that poems usually don't, like the helplessness due to age and the loss ...

Here I am for the review! So, starting off, great feel with this story. It falls into a comfortable rhythm pretty soon and has a good deal of potential. But ...