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Re: The Grave
Muahahaha, hello Vinc... or Aquestioning, as you were known then. Am I going to heartlessly review a piece you wrote eight years ago? Absolutely this is my second time doing ...
Jun 30, 2021 -
Re: Speaking to the Air
Hello, Crunch! This is a gorgeous poem. I loved it. Tomorrow My fate is undecided. Tomorrow I will fight for change. Tomorrow My efforts will have meaning, and I am ...
Jun 29, 2021 -
Re: Trace's Exile
Hello there ArctiWolf, it's me again! Okay, this is really cool! I think it's swell that you decided to enamour us with not just stories about Greg but some about ...
Jun 28, 2021 -
Re: No Bravery Without Fear
Greetings, Messenger! Like the last short story, this one did not disappoint in any way! I absolutely loved the descriptions of the desert and was comfortable with the pacing. The ...
Jun 28, 2021 -
Re: Brothers at Sea
Hello Messenger! Ooh, I'm glad to see a story set in the same universe as Williwaw! It's not connected to the novel itself, but is clearly meant as a casual ...
Jun 26, 2021 -
Re: The Hunting Ground???Chapter 14, Does It Make You Uncomfortable, Runaway?
Hey there, writtenbybella! Okay, so my first impression: based on what little I know, this reads pretty well. There's good flow between your lines, there isn't really any part that ...
Jun 25, 2021 -
Re: The Assassin
Hello there, greg! Quite an interesting story you've got here; I'm going to drop a quick review! Bang! went my sniper rifle, the bullet in an instant travelling two kilometers ...
Jun 24, 2021 -
Re: Xavier x Lilith FLUFF (Reupload)
Hi, Angel! Lee's here for a quick review! I'm generally not a fan of romance/fluff/smut, but you've written this piece quite well. Your choice of words is pretty impressive, and ...
Jun 23, 2021 -
Re: Winter
Hey there, Mingan! I hope you're having a good day! Okay, this poem is really quite lovely. It's haunting, ethereally beautiful, and the imagery is amazing. I loved it for ...
Jun 22, 2021 -
Re: Asteroids
Wow, this is quite poetic. I like your writing style, it's got a rather nice flair to it, and a slightly sassy elegance. I can't comment on why you decided ...
Jun 21, 2021 -
Re: A Hero's Sacrifice~
Hi, Tttu06! Ah, a story with a tragic yet wholesome end? I'm a sucker for those. It's short, simple, and has just enough information to hold itself up alone. Alright, ...
Jun 20, 2021 -
Re: The Chronicles of Tharizdun's Betrayal- Preface
Oh. My. God. What is this? 0.o I LOVED IT SO MUCH! This world is a wonderfully complex, intriguing, and mystical place- mostly because I'm in it. This is the ...
Jun 19, 2021 -
Re: Greg and The Lake of Death
Yay, another little story about Greg! You're pretty quick with these stories. I particularly enjoyed this one! The ending was actually quite thrilling, what with Mandy the mantis drawing ever ...
Jun 18, 2021 -
Re: Greg and The Wasps
Ahhhh yay a follow up! This was just as good as the last one, if not better! I'm a sucker for stories about animals and insects living their own little ...
Jun 17, 2021 -
Re: The Spider Who Paid Rent
Sp-spid-AAAARGHHHHH I wish I hadn't opened those images Spiders are fine by me... as long as they keep a distance of about 1 kilometre. Ahem. The review. This story is ...
Jun 16, 2021
