LilPWilly

I like this a lot. It’s just out there enough to keep my attention lol ‘Built’ is genius. Th only critique I can give is that there should be a ...

I hope you find a way to get free. Your profile says your 18, so like me, you’re probably struggling with your parents. At least it’s only a few more ...

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I hope you find a way to get free. Your profile says your 18, so like me, you’re probably struggling with your parents. At least it’s only a few more ...

I like this lol A little rushed, and it highkey sounds exactly like treasure island, but I like it loll

Oh shoot This character development!! And the bit at the end about the evil mother sandwich, gripping, no really. So my favorite part is how much you leave open for ...

Woah what’s with all the laundry detergent poems in the past day or so

Preach Fr I just said frick it this year, failed a couple classes, and still got into the college I was aiming for from the beginning. I swear, all this ...

🤯🤯🤯

This is so great. You mix just the right amount of poetry into a plain and simple story to help the emotion grab. The perspective and characterization is perfect too.

Pretty much sums it up.

Wow. I found this in a goofy thread.. I didn’t expect it to be beautiful loll

WAIT. Is this about the earth?

WAIT. Is this about the earth?

Thank you! That%u2019s good advice. I should probably full stop at each language switch, or maybe even separate this into stanzas. The image in my mind is more real and ...

There’s a lot of typos, but I like the story. If you are going to use past tense, you’re going to have to sacrifice quick expressions of emotion for an ...