Lightsong

She threw punches that would make Cassius Clay jealous. I think you should change the reference to something that is more global since I'm not getting it. I guess this ...

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Hey, I'm here to leave the second review for this story! :D My mind trembles, Don't know what's real anymore. Lost my sense of feeling, I hear the silence roar. ...

Hey, I'm here to review your piece! ;) First of all, I want to applaud you for your high level of vocabulary. Being a non-native English speaker, I had to ...

Hey, I'm here for the requested review! :) “What have they done? ” muttered Alrick softly to himself as he saw a plume of thick black smoke rise from the ...

Hey, I'm here for the requested review! :) The morning sun shines brightly in my eyes as I walk up the staircase to my parents’ chamber. "Shines in my eyes"? ...

I love this poem. It really reflects the situation in which the chat is dead. I personally like the last stanza as its last line, "Nobody but us chickens." hits ...

Hey, it's me to give the requested review! :D Your story's premise is interesting. I know this would end to the guy being the Beast, but to explore the story ...

Hey, I'm here to make the requested review! I enjoy reading this story. :) I went to school, had friends, and life was good. I prefer consistency, and the format ...

Hey, I'm here to review! ;) A Hell Girl fanfic! I'm looking forward to how this goes. I've watched some of Hell Girl episodes and they were good. I like ...

Hey, I'm here to make the requested review! :D To start off, I want to talk about a short story and the instances where it has many characters. Many characters ...

Hey, here's the requested review. :) Sorry for taking too long. I would go with the grammar first before commenting on other things. “Who are you people?” demanded Sherlock, his ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :) First of all, I just have to say this chapter is full with dialogues. I hope you can cut them a bit, make them ...

Hey, I'm here to review this deserving piece. ;) And Ashka created the beastlings, horrific creatures in the image of humans, so as to reveal how great his first creations ...

Hey, this is me to review as requested! :D Sorry for the long wait! I see you've got a ton of reviews here, and I hope you'll improve this chapter ...