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Lightsong

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: a stranger 'midst mourning

    Hey, I'm here to review. Usually, when I review poems, I do not take the reason they are made into consideration. I see them as a result of imagination, the ...

    Oct 10, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: The Last Dance

    Hey, I'm here to review for the third time. :) Okay, so I'm going to view this as a whole. From what I've seen, the paragraphs aren't balanced in length. ...

    Oct 10, 2016
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Forgotten Kiss

    Hey, I'm here again! xD As usual, your flash fiction strives for uniqueness, the magical feeling that readers would love to have. It's portrayed nicely through A Moment of Perfection ...

    Oct 10, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: A Moment of Perfection

    Hey, I'm here to review. So, the first time I read this, I was hooked because it was about painting and the way you described the girl's beauty was art ...

    Oct 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Bleeding Butterflies.

    Hi, I'm here to review. Everyday the world turns, everyday the sun shines, everyday the wind blows, and everyday she dies some more. I'm a fan of repetition, but I ...

    Oct 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: Checkmate

    Wow. Just wow. The entire setup is clever. Montoya has never been sent there to avoid further maaaacre; she is sent to be the victim of such murder herself. The ...

    Oct 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Bundle of Flowers ~ Chapter 5

    Hey, I'm here to leave a short review (because I'm on phone). There is a couple of things that I like from this chapter. First, it brings me warmth feeling ...

    Oct 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Politics Re: Ms. Dix

    Hey, I'm here to review. I've been looking for a short story to pick, and this political one looks like a good way to start. It's 1:16 AM, so pardon ...

    Oct 4, 2016
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Dear Mary

    Hey, I'm here to review! I have close-to-none experience of reviewing lyric, so pardon me if I analyze this poorly. :D I just wanted to Write this letter In hopes ...

    Oct 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Irradiate -- Chapter 1

    Hey, I'm here to review. The description of this novel chapter catches my attention - Overwatch is a game with beautiful graphic, although I would never enjoy playing it because ...

    Oct 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Frost Lark News 10/2/16

    Hey, I'm here to review. :D The idea behind this novel seems to me obviously based on the current election held in America. So, THE END part has a statement ...

    Oct 3, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Recycling metaphors and filling garbage bags with cliches

    Hey, I'm here to review. All right. Before I start to analyze each stanza (if there is one) and lines, I would like to give off my first impression after ...

    Oct 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Pseyechia; Chapter 1.4: A News Story (Edited)

    Hey, I'm here to review. :D Like Sienna, I'm also thrown off-guard when seeing Leroy's texting style, but this adds more variety to the way people chat, and it's more ...

    Oct 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: i want to leave this place

    Hey, I'm here to review this piece as requested. :D Okay, so the first thing I want to talk about is the title. It's not my habit to critic on ...

    Sep 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: jest kidding.

    Hey, Candy. I'm here to review. :D The fact that this poem is a rhyme one is the biggest reason why I dig this. I love rhyme poems and find ...

    Sep 20, 2016


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