The patrol was at night, near the southern Queens district, my area of choice. Despite the fact that this city never slept, I found the pockets of silence in the alleyways comforting. My astethic.
I think it was the contrast. Yes, the contrast from a busy day, full of light and noise...to a calm night filled with nothing.
Silence was my drug. Darkness made it better.
I kept my head on my shoulders, though. It was no joke to be patrolling these grounds without some thought to where you went. I knew Queens well, but the nightly walk of it always was disorienting.
I never cared about the posters I had seen on every lampost. The morning meeting that always featured him, the nightly news always droning on about him endlessly until I fell asleep on my couch with them humming in the background.
The Chess Master. That was the name everyone gave him. Or her. We had no idea what gender this serial killer was, but that only it had a method of killing that involved some sort of game of chess.
Every victim was from Queens. Every victim was found near a chessboard with a losing game. All black pieces, one white piece. The piece was always the king, toppled over and stained with a splot of the victim's blood.
It seems I was the only one on my squad that wasn't afraid of him.
The killer had about fifteen bodies to his name that night. Some people in the office suspected that he would kill only sixteen out of sheer irony. I was on patrol to prevent the next victim from being caught. Simple duty. Just look for stragglers on the street and tell them to go home.
That's what made me run around Queens all night. And that entire night, I didn't see a single soul on the streets. Not even the usual bums. Not even the men we paid to patrol around here.
I noticed that even some of the usual cars and cabs on the side of the road weren't there. People that usually parked there every day where nowhere to be found. At first, this creeped me out.
But then I realized that these were paid parking places. Of course no one would be here at night. Of course.
I kept walking around the usual path, losing myself in the thoughts and the silence. It was such a quiet night.
Too quiet.
I'm not sure what triggered it, but I felt suddenly...off. Like something was wrong. My walking slowed down as I reached into my pocket to retrieve my phone. Maybe I could go ahead and report a quiet night. I felt nervous for some reason. It was the kind of nervousness you felt when you were lost. Or when you were in the wrong place.
I dialed the stations number.
And for a split second, I thought about hanging up. Am I really calling them because I have cold feet?
But then no one answered.
I looked at my phone in cofusion, making sure I had hit the right contact. The office never missed a call.
This was wrong.
I don't remember them wishing me good luck tonight, or telling me to be careful. To watch where I walked.
All I remember is feeling a slight prick on my shoulder. Then absolutely nothing at all. When I woke up again, I was in a chair. My legs and arms were strapped stiff. I could only move my head and hands. Nothing else. There was thick tape wrapped around my mouth and head.
I immediately began to struggle against the bonds, but it was pointless. These were strong ties. Well made.
There was also this...pull on my eyelids. My head felt muddled and heavy. I must be reeling still from the drug I was given. It lingered and made my thoughts basic, unable to think clearly for more than a few seconds at a time.
I began to panic. I was sweating from the struggle already, and my efforts only made it worse. I wasted all my energy after what felt like hours.
Something opened a door behind me. Footsteps against the concrete made me try to turn my head, but I was exhausted. The figure stepped in front of me, a table the only space between us.
"Hello, Miss Montoya." The figure said, his voice low, "Welcome to the game."
He pushed a table closer to my chair. I stared down at the chess board. It had been ages since I touched a chess piece.
I looked around. No one else was here. No trace of bodies. No trace of blood. No way to know where I even was.
The figure stepped a little into the light, a confused expression on his face.
"Expecting someone? That is strange." He tilted his head down as he moved his pawn forward two spaces,
"The station told me that only one volunteer would be sent to me tonight."
He looked at me, expectantly. I was shaking in my bonds.
"Your move."
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Interesting enough, but, at the end I didn't want to try the link. Your writing style doesn't resonate well with me. But it was concise, I like concise. But I actually wanted more from this. It's a nice start though.
Hey there! Sofie here with another review
Wow. This whole concept is so original and different than anything else I've read on this site. It really hooks you in from the start, like every good story does. The minimalist approach to this story is so great and I think embodies the idea that when it comes to writing, less is usually more. Also, the pauses between each sentence almost give it a poetic quality, which was really nice. I think overall, you have a nice poetic voice that just flows very well. But even though it's poetic, it's still to-the-point and efficiently told. Great job!
Keep up the good work. Looking forward to what you write next!
-Sofia
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you are interested, I have a link to the audio version at the bottom of the story.
That. Was. Epic. I must say, very well written and extremely intriguing, too.
The gaps between each sentence fit really well, gave it a certain anticipation. Very nicely done.
I don't really know what else to say apart from wow. I look forward to reading more from you, whatever you choose to upload.
Have a great night/day.
~Thomas~
Thanks, Thomas! I'm super happy you enjoyed it. I'm planning on posting more of these, and some that I have done in the past too. So, more to come definitely.

That link at the end of the story is a narration of Checkmate. So, if you have the time and are in the mood for a short little audiobook, feel free to stop by and leave a comment! I do reads as much as I can for the channel, so every story I post here will have one. The bad part about that is, Reads take a long time. Writing the stories isn't too much of a time consumer, but making the audio version is.
Pretty long process. But ah.
Anyway, if you like what you see on the channel, let me know!
Wow. Just wow.
The entire setup is clever. Montoya has never been sent there to avoid further maaaacre; she is sent to be the victim of such murder herself.
The whole scene makes me think people's determination to avoid more deaths using all means, even if that includes sacrificing one of your own. The people in the office acts on mere assumption that Montoya will be the last victim. I guess at a moment of desperation (15 have been killed so far) people act crazily
The second, well, cunning setup is the chess game. Montoya doesn't have a chance to win it. She is drugged so that her thoughts become basic, and it's been a while since she played the game. Everything screams, 'all of this is made for you to lose mwahaha'. Scary serial killer.
The minimalistic approach to this story is efficient, although the focus on certain parts are somewhat unnecessary. More elaboration on why Montoya is sent there, the kind of society the place holds, and just more gritty details can make this story more poignant. Right now, I've won by the devious way it's set up
While this reveals the station's intent quite clearly, it begs the question; why does it not attack the killer when it knows how to contact him? Maybe you can clear this confusion up?
And that is all! Keep up the good job!
It suggests that the station is corrupt, and would rather temporarily solve the problem rather than completely resolve it. That, or they are afraid of the killer. Perhaps he has hands somewhere precious to those who run the station. I thought of it as like a Gotham scenario.

I'm really happy you enjoyed it. You can check out the audio version I narrated myself using the link I put in there. It's all a work in progress.
Thanks for the review! Share the video around if you so desire.