Liaya

Well, I think this is a great start! It addresses something we all feel sometimes, I think, and time really seems to be such a complicated subject. Your'e fluent and ...

I love this! There have been many times where I wish the quiet, twilight hours before morning could persist forever, and you've captured that sensation beautifully with your poem. I ...

Whoa, I'm hooked! I want to know more! The idea you set up for this world feels both fascinating and unique. Usually I can go on and on about things ...

This is fascinating, actually. I like your writing style, and you have a gift with words. I also saw very few typos. However, there are a couple of things I ...

Well done! Your words flow great and your rhythm is amazing, and you manage to portray a rather unfortunate event and still somehow manage to sound positive. I especially like ...

This is very well done! Your writing was professional and articulate. On that note, perhaps it was slightly dry. I know essays are supposed to be impersonal, but I think ...

This is fun! It's pretty awesome for such a small little poem. It has a nice feel to it and a bit of quirk. I would suggest altering the second ...

Well, you guys just completed another awesome chapter! Well done! You really have captured my imagination with your book here. The words flow beautifully and your character is feeling pretty ...

All right, here I am with my second review! This was a lot better the second time through. The description gave me a clearer view of the girls and it ...

Well, this is a nice poem, though it doesn't seem to end at all. (Actually just adding a period would help.) It brought back some fond memories of my social ...

Lol, this is complete nonsense! I love it! :) The rhythm is really good and the tone is fun...it's just great. It's just totally whimsical. Your word choice is good, ...

Wow...this sounds exactly like how I felt my junior year...and perhaps even a bit how I feel now. All this promise I was so convinced of just fading away to ...

Ooh...I like isn't at all what I expected but it's really wonderfully written. It's sad, though--really sad. And wonderful. Somehow it left me feeling a little more strong and determined. ...

Wow.... So, I started reading this and I thought "I don't understand..." Then I realized I didn't care, because that was part of what made it so alluring. There's a ...

I really liked this! I love the way you make me want to know more about the "me" in the poem. It's beautifully written. I especially love that you switched ...