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Leviari

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: I'll be there

    Hello! Here's a brief review for you: I enjoyed this read. This poem surely is very deep and meaningful and yet you skillfully managed to place a funny imaginary: "I ...

    May 3, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Denouncing You

    Hello! Here's a short review for you: The poem is full of emotion. My interpretation is that the protagonist of the poem stopped to think about a delusional relationship and ...

    May 2, 2019
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Other Re: Sculptured man

    Hello! The lyrics are truly terrific! I personally like the length of this piece, I think it's effective and strong the way it is (I actually like the harsh ending ...

    May 2, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Forgetful

    This poem is amazing and your writing equally beautiful. I feel this piece on a personal level and you really made it powerful. I like that the two central stanzas ...

    May 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: tell me.

    Hello! Here's a short review for you: Your poem is very beautiful. The twist at the end caught me off guard and it was a very smart idea. You started ...

    May 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Snickers

    Hello! Just a short review for you: This poem is fresh and light. It made me crack a smile, it's fun without it being childish. I like that you decided ...

    May 1, 2019
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Need

    Hello! This piece is very powerful, especially the first stanza. "Cry me a river, Build me a bridge. You do whatever for me, i give." In these few lines you ...

    May 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Forgotten Heroes

    Hi! Such a beautiful poem! It's very interesting to read about war from another perspective, like from a son and daughter. War impacts everyone's life, even those who are waiting ...

    May 1, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: For Annie

    I stumbled across a review you did on someone's poem, and your opinion was so perfectly explained that I had to come read on of your poems. And gosh am ...

    Apr 30, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: If You Really Loved Her

    Hi! You've already received some great comments about punctuation, so let's move on, shall we? "You would make the time Despite how busy you are She could never be An ...

    Apr 30, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: i don't know her name

    I love everything about this poem! Let's start with the title: immediately captivating, just enough explanatory to grab the reader attention without giving too much away. I like the way ...

    Apr 30, 2019
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: The brain bug.

    I absolutely love this poem! The rhyme scheme makes it easy to follow, gives it a sense of lightness and musicality despite the dark theme. The language is evocative, simple ...

    Apr 30, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Love Conquers

    beautifully written and very romantic! You created very strong images to give the reader a concrete idea of an abstract feeling. I think the introduction of "girl's POV" and "guy's ...

    Apr 30, 2019


As I grow older, I pay less attention to what men say. I just watch what they do.
— Andrew Carnegie