Leviari

Hey there :) "You fear the endless dark, Like Noah feared the flood, You stay in your Ark." These lines really hit deep for me, as a person with social ...

Hi! Congratulations on your writing, this is such a nice poem! Personally, this was my favorite part: "They chronicle time, as the weeks and years pass ‘Cause memories are faulty, ...

Hi! I loved reading your poem. You are very talented and you offered a very interesting perspective. I thought it was absolutely brilliant the way you opened the poem with ...

Hi! What a beautiful and heartfelt poem! True love is indeed "boundless and endless" and your words perfectly captured this sentiment. I'd like to especially congratulate you on your punctuation, ...

Oh god I'm truly speechless. But I'll try and force some words because it would be terribly unfair to leave this poem without praising it first. You set a tone ...

You really write wonderfully. " The child’s excitement has become cold and clogged, Weep now for what you have done to yourself You have subjected yourself to a standard that ...

Hello! This is such an amazing piece. Your metaphors are strong and vivid, you conveyed the portrayal of a toxic relationship very, very effectively. I also appreciated that you did ...

Hello! This poem is so original! I love the way you presented it and of course the musicality of it. It's just great how you managed to combine together all ...

Hello! I loved literally everything about this poem: the structure, the rhythm, the theme and, most importantly, the images. You've written very suggestive scenarios that make your poem punching and ...

Hello! This poem is amazing and... surprising. I love that you decided to reveal the true theme only at the end. At the begin I thought you were just describing ...

Beautiful and heartfelt poem you have here!! You explained your emotions in a clear, relatable way: no metaphors, no figures of speech, just a raw description of ache. Well done. ...

Hello! What can I say? Just wow... such a beautiful composition. I enjoyed the layout of the poem, it's intriguing but not difficult to follow. Every word is placed with ...

Please do not change the title! It's very evocative and I think it works perfectly with the tone of this essay. Also, the incipit is amazing: 3 words and you've ...

Hi! Here's a brief review for you: The poem felt like a punch in my gut. And yes, that's a good thing! This piece feels very close to my experience ...