Layla

Hi! I liked this piece A LOT it's really good. I hope your friends okayy. You shoul have added one or two more stanzas to your poem so we could ...

I know you're probably tired of peope having pity for you, but I am so sorry this happened to you and your sister. This should never happen to anybody and ...

Hi I'm Layla.! I liked this piece but I just want to point out a few things. The signal what does it say, I'm not the best person with grammar ...

I like how you wrothe it in first person. it wouldnt make sense in third. But anyways, the ending part when she was going throught the stuff of what she ...

How is everyone's life in this story?? Hahaha. I liked it tho and i actually wanted to read it because it was short. You should finish it asap and then ...

I love how your writing isn't like the others and how it's not abstract in a way. It's straightforward, and perfect, to a T!! I also like how you put ...

Hi! uuum there's just a few things I would like to point out... Okayy. well in the beginning you started talking about more of her family than herself. Not a ...

Well other people ahve told you the corrections you might want to make so i'll just tell you what i thik. so what im getting out of this is you ...

AAAAAAAAAAAAw that poem is sooo pretty. in the first line the word "in" i dont think is needd. in the second stanza when its like "as i hide in your ...

Thats kool. no rush or anything but hurry up and write the rest!!!!!!it looks soooo interesting. Do they fall in love?? No dont tell me...it'll ruin the story.Can you send ...

:D aaaaw that is sooooo cute!! i have a friend like that too and shes like your friend Kelsie. the ending part where you were like kelsie i love you ...

i hart this!!!! i mean cause well its me. its kinda sad too. but im happy its not about you!!!! right??right??right??? or is it?? omg is it?? well anyways i ...

That person changed. That girl in the mirror She can't tell me if she's happier. She can't say if life is any easier. But there's one thing she knows... There's ...