Laurenh6

Hey there! I'm going to review your work! I thought the plot was rather interesting and I enjoyed reading it through :)... So here are my thoughts as I read ...

Hi there! I'm going to review your work! First of all, I thought the plot was very sad yet intriguing .. I like the last sentence about "and she chose ...

Hi there- I thought this was really cool and interesting.. It was kind of just a bundle of thoughts all put together XD.. I thought a few paragraphs were needed ...

Hi, I found this really interesting to read - quite controversial XD.. but interesting as a topic. I feel like the way you've written this poem is quite rhythmic and ...

This is so cool and quirky I love it- totally different to what I was expecting.. The flying spaghetti monster being a part of Pastafarianism just added a whole twist ...

Hi there! So I read through this and was quite interested so I thought why not review it!Going to the positives first... I love your detail in the first sort ...

Hi there! I just wanted to say I thought this was a really interesting bit of writing - quite deep and meaningful. Some of it took me a little while ...

Hey there! I just wanted to say, I thought this was really cool as a poem. I loved the flow - how there was little punctuation- perhaps to resemble the ...

Hi there! I just wanted to say you're soo good at writing and I love this plot wow! To start with the things I loved... I thought your description is ...

Hey, I just wanted to say , I thought this was really interesting - like you can really write! I loved the title which is why I clicked on it ...

Hi there! I clicked on your story because I thought the title was amazing "Cold and Alone" sounds so dramatic. I loved the sound of it , because I love ...

Wow! To start with the repitition of "Do it" in small font to bold capital letters is so powerful. Not once did you mention he was the devil - but ...

Oh my gosh this is amazing!! I love horror stories..Actually written one on here :P ...but this is amazing oh my god! First of all, your character! The girl - ...

Hi there- I feel that this was a very unusual and intriguing start to a story. I haven't seen many novels set out the way this one is.. that's what ...

Hi there - I found this rather intriguing and it ended up totally different to how I expected... the opening line was blunt and simplistic, yet concise in what the ...