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Hey fictional, Subtle here for a review! Wow...I must say this is a strange poem, but I like the idea behind it. It is quite interesting that you've taken the ...

Hey blimeylimey217, Laure here for a review! First of all, allow me to say that the title is absolutely brilliant! It reeled me in instantly. Let's get on with some ...

Hm, this is certainly an interesting poem. Even though it did not rhyme, the poem had a good, constant rhythm to it that made it enjoyable and easier to read. ...

Hi magpie94, Laure here to review. Oh this poem is brilliant, is a very psychologically powerful poem and I agree with @aouther2b. Your structure and your format really shaped it ...

Hey tronks, Laure here to review! This poem, though simple really touches my heart. It creates a really gentle, melancholy but at the same time, positive atmosphere. The imagery and ...

Hey anshira, I really like this poem! Is light-hearted, whimsical, fun to read and most of all it carries a very important message across to all of us! You should ...

Heyo! Laure here to review! This is a fine poem, and a wonderful simile too. Very accurate and beautifully written and is very touching. The reason I like this poem ...

This poem is absolutely stunning, it left me completely wordless. The imagery has painted a real picture of an empty street, the wind blowing and rain coming. Is completely [I ...

Hi Shannon, Laure here for a review: First of all, let me say you have a true knack of creating imagery with your words. This is also a very unique ...

Hi Silverlock, Laure here for a review. This is certainly not what I expected at all, actually as I was reading along my mind was reeling from shock and I ...

Oh, this is so good! You have created very realistic characters and a beautiful description of the sea. This drew me because the writing was magnificent, and I don't usually ...

*clasps* Beautiful poem, where simplicity has worked. I love the use of parallel used in this short poem. Blacken the Days Lighten the Nights Beautiful description, they contrast with each ...

Oh this is quite exceptional, the imagery is magnificent. I love the constant rhythm in this poem, it made flow with a nice beat, also making it easier to read ...

You sure aren't kidding when you say is dark, but is always the dark ones that I find the most beautiful. You have actually created a very chilling but yet ...

Hi Butterfinger, Laure here for a review. First of all, let me say this poem is very dynamic and powerful. So, let us get on with it. I'm more of ...