LaughingHyena

Very creepy! I love the descriptions you used, and the fact that you wrote it from the corpse's point of view is pretty inventive. The language feels somewhat old-fashioned, which ...

This is a poem with an interesting idea behind it; it portrays both the harmful side of the cigarette as well as the emotional reasons for the subject's addiction. I ...

This is brilliant! You capture a really relatable feeling in a very imaginative and visual fashion, creating a vivid image and conveying emotion at the same time, yet also managing ...

Nice poem, I particularly like the flow of it and the natural rhyming; a lot of poems written by young writers on the subject of love and heartbreak seem to ...

Nice poem, I find it interesting that you used an archaic or old-fashioned style to write it, which is always a challenge and surprisingly difficult to pull off effectively and ...

Interesting idea and pretty creepy too! I like the descriptions of the individuals, this introduction certainly does seem intriguing. In a few areas there were a few capitalization errors and ...

Wow, this is really good! I love the use of descriptions, such as comparing the human characters to cockroaches and the detail you use in describing their appearance and the ...

Extremely interesting article; the first thing I'll say is how professional it is-the quotations, the references to back up statements-this would fit in nicely in any science news website, magazine ...

This is an interesting start to what sounds as if could be a good story. The descriptions are very nice, particularly 'the ruby red drapes hung from floor to ceiling ...

Hi, sorry I wasn't able to read this sooner, I haven't been on here in a little while. I really, really like this! I love the way you've portrayed a ...

This is a well-written and intriguing piece of writing, opening on a subject which is often written about (love and being rejected), but with a highly original twist. I have ...

Very nice poem indeed, is it based on the river Thames by any chance? It's just that the last stanza reminded me of it, as the Thames was declared 'biologically ...

Wow...I've seen several haikus before, and I've known good ones to be capable of creating loads of imagery and emotion in very few words, but none quite like this one. ...

Lovely poem! I really love the way you personify the rain against the window, almost as if it is a real person knocking at the window, it is really imaginative ...

This is a very good poem with a strong message behind it, but I personally thought a few things could possibly be altered. Firstly, there were a few commas and ...