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LanguidLiger

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Beautyness

    Well this seems to be a very abstract poem. Are you refering to the tendency of people to believe in the notion that emotional release is a sign of weakness? ...

    Jul 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: I Cried For Nothing

    Interesting. This poem seems to be about a childs relationship with their parents. Now that the child has grown up he feels like a buredon. And his parents have begun ...

    Jul 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: What is...?

    This poem seems to take an interesting perspective on psychology, or perhaps more appropriately, philosophy and its increasing replacement by science. All the ulterior motives for what we see as ...

    Jul 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Bubble of Water

    This poem seems to me, to be about a plee for solitude. The author has found himself on a journey for self discovery. The comparison of self to a bubble ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Shut the Hell Up, Jiminy

    I find this poem interesting for reasons which I can easily define. This is good. For one the poem is an interesting perspective on the psyche, that it is basically ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: carry the wind

    The premise of this poem seems to be that we repress our emotions. The author believes that if we were less reluctant to release our emotions, we would uneestand one ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To Be Destroyed

    The stance of the writer seems to be a modern take on the mouning process. Dont mope over my death, celebrate my life, and le nature maintain my prescence in ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Teacher

    So is this meant to convey a message if the different roles that people play? Some have varried interests that they call to mind for entertainment. Thier tastes are varied ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: A Dream of Snow

    Nice work. I love narrations on the craniums power and enigma. Ive been doing a bit of subconscious related work myself. So I liked the echo. The writing tells of ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: Guess the Place

    Hah nice work. I enjoyed the insight that you show here. You tricked me. I was thinking slaughterhouse or auschwitz. Anyway I like that you showed the deference we show ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Limbo Line Train

    I like this piece for its tasteful darkness. I dont really no ehats going on here but Ill give you. My interpretation and maybe youll like it. I think that ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: She Couldn't Be Good

    You seem to be speaking of emotions lost. But your confused as to when or if this happened? Then ou continue saying that you wont enjoy your suitors company, and ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: This Was Her Life, And This Was How She Lived It

    So it seems from the opinion youve effexted here that you have a suspicous outlook on the future of a poet. In the first paragragh you relate your feeling that ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Transformation of a Lonely Heart

    I like the way that you show the transformation of a cibrant social life, to a closed and deliberately unfeeling cage. This is a realistic view of loss and how ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Falling

    I like the format, the slope gives your reasoning a shape. You start out stating raw fact, then explain how you were led by life to believe that the best ...

    Jul 8, 2014


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