LanguidLiger

This poem is very interesting because it identifys the sea as a partner, coming and going, and shows how we really get to know people when worry sets in. Are ...

The message of this poem I think i can say confidently is know your victem. An anti-bullying message. I would suggest that you change "a rope slid over his head" ...

So this seems to be a poetic ballad, written in the style of prose. I would suggest that you say " that subtle way that her face lights up" as ...

This poem reminded me of sleep deprivation. Especially when you criticized the sun and said that teeth are bared in the dark both promisingly and forbodeingly. The anticipation of a ...

Right off the bat, the must be capitalized, and other than that I only have issues with the flow. For example when you wrote "but no escape is found in ...

Firstly, Im not sure if this is written after an esit, but I cant see very many problems. And Im not saying that just to be nice. I myself am ...

Hi. I would just like to impose a few nitpicks on you first. During the poem I could understand it perfectly well, but some may be confused by the present ...

This is an interesting societal analysis. We aretaight to value ourselves so highly that we lose sight of the opinions of others. And you cant do anything about it because ...

Wow! This is a poem that really conforms with my own outlook! Most of the powerhouses are either sociopaths or figurheads. They either dont know what theyre doing, or they ...

This poem seems to be about temptation to me. I loved the first line";you will not see earth from heaven". It is interesting to see but entirely believable thy one ...

This seems to be a light peice, and I could just let it flutter to the desk, but I like interpretation so Ill give it a shot, although it could ...

This peice brought to mind, for me, trust issues. Testing wether he person will guide you through the unknown, being weary of the times where you lose consciousness. The religous ...

Well, eyes are our way of telling one another that were here not only in body but in mind. They say the eyes are the windows to the soul. I ...

This seems to be either an analogy of the courage you work up to inhabit an enviroment as redundant and mundane as school culture or a more personal activity being ...

The classic question we ask of humanity. Why must we document our deeds? A more cynical answer to the wuestion would be that if the wrong peiple were in control ...