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Being A Leader Doens't Mean You Have to Be Rude To Others To Get Them To Follow You. It's That You Give Them A Good Example To Follow And Look Up To.

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Frankenstien With Scales

    I want to say it's inspired by one of my poems, but I'm not as grotesque as this was, but I definitely love this poem. Sometimes I feel like everyone ...

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Boredom

    I think you have described what i feel right now!XD I really like this, while it may not be an extremely long poem, it's still a very well-crafted poem. You ...

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Frozen Girl

    This is amazing, you explained how I feel in the morning waiting to go to school, when I get so cold, my toes feel like they've separated from my body!XD ...

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Knives

    "If i don't know how to love you..........I'll leave you be...." a quote from a song that people should use all the time, in this case, your dad shouldn't have ...

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: empty soul, empty mind

    I NOTICE YOU MY GOOD FRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!! But I really like how you worded what a lot of people think in their minds, and for your first poem ever on here, ...

    Jan 10, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Anticipation

    This is amazing! I wish I was the person receiving this letter!Xd Ugh, but anyways, you did really good, there may have been a couple of spelling errors, but I ...

    Jan 10, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Sweet Boy

    This poem was amazing! I felt like I was the boy and you were comforting me that everything would be all right, that you had built had built my world ...

    Jan 10, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Fears

    I remember when I used to be so afraid of the dark when I was like 5, now that I look back at it, I find it so adorable. But ...

    Jan 10, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Street Dog

    This was really sad, a good sad though. The puppy seemed like a good puppy, an innocent one, no way of doing anything wrong. What I felt bad about was ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Seasons Of Her Pain

    OH MY GOD!!!!!!! HOW ARE YOU DESCRIBING HOW I FEEL!!!!!!!!!??????????? I mean like, obviously I'm here, but still, that's how I feel all the time!!!!!! I think you did wonderfully, ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Charlie's Fire {Part Three}

    Ok, so now that I called it, and I know who the motorcyclists were, I can finally say...HOLY HELLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!! I think I have a theory, after he jumps down, he ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Charlie's Fire {Part Two}

    I don't know how you do it!!!!!!!!!! Just like the first one, I was speechless, I couldn't even write a review because I had no idea what to say! But ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: This Too Shall Pass

    This is really heartbreaking, in a good way though. I felt bad because you describe how you don't feel ok, but then, you have something that will help you, or ...

    Dec 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: End

    I may not understand what you were trying to get at in this poem, but I loved it nonetheless! It's like you're saying that there was an incident that the ...

    Dec 20, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Colors

    I absolutely loved this because you're basically describing a torturous war between emotions. I love how you assign a color to an emotion, that was super creative! And also, I ...

    Dec 20, 2017


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