LadySpark

Hullooo Holly! Found this while searching for things to review~ hmmm... I don't know how I feel about this. You can feel the turbulent emotions in it, and I love ...

Hi! here to review! I'm Spark, by the way. I think I've seen you around the chatroom before :3 So, to be honest, this story is very cliche and redundant ...

hello there! Spark here for a quick review. So the first thing that I saw, was the format. You need stanzas. Badly. Because even though the stuff written there is ...

Hi There! Spark here to review :3 So first off, love your title

Hi! I'm Spark, and I'm here to review you this review day. Oh my goodness, dear. First of all--remove the bold. It does nothing for your work, and it almost ...

Hello, fellow tryant! I'm Spark, leader of tsunami and I'm here to review this wonderful poem of yours. First off, Very impressive poem. It put me in the mind of ...

Hi, Iggy! :D Let's get down to the deep and dirty, shall we? (Also, I freaking love this chapter omg) "It's all over, Sam . The road trips, the robberies, ...

Hellooooo! here as requested! :D But h e doesn't care, He has too win again tonight. He loves to hear them scream his name. It's all about the girls, All ...

Hi babe! Spark here to review! :D So, I really like the format of this poem. It actually feels like thoughts, because it's disjointed but still understandable. I really like ...

Hello dear, here to review! :D Wow, I'm really impressed by this. I feel like you set out knowing exactly what you wanted to say, and then said it as ...

Hi Ary! I'm Spark, and I'll be reviewing you today! :D Ohhh, you decided to take part in the challenge! That's awesome! :D and this is a great representation of ...

Hello dear! Here to review! ;) My name is Spark! :D So, I found this poem to be good is theory, but just a little confusing in execution. At first, ...

Hello there! My name is Spark, and I'll be reviewing you today. Is this the beginning or the end >>Make sure not to have spaces between your words and punctuation

Hello Love! Here to review! :) Her I trusted as life How does one trust someone as life? As much as life, as I did life maybe, but not just ...

Hello there! Here to review you, today :3 So, my first impression of this poem was how meaningful it obviously is to the writer. I can tell that you really ...