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Re: A Fresh Start
Hi! I'm LadyPurple! I will be doing a review of your work here! The first thing I noticed about this was that the text was in a big block. This ...
Jul 8, 2013 -
Re: Souls and their existence....
Yo! I'm LadyPurple and I am here to drop a review! Ok so I like this essay. It's deep and thought provoking. I just have two tiny nit-picks and otherwise ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: delete please
Hi! LadyPurple here with a review for you! The first thing I noticed is spacing. And the puncuation and the spelling (only a little). Let's use Lily to explain my ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: the bad dream
Hi! I'm LadyPurple and I'm here to review you! I'm not sure if you meant for this to turn into a big block of text or have all of those ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Wallet
Yo! I'm going to review you! Prepare your work!! I like the idea of this. But I think "fall" would be capitalized. Because it's the season. Crazy to think that ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: What They Told Us: Chapter 2
Greetings! It is me, LadyPurple, here to review the second chapter of this! Yeah! WOO! Let's do this thing! First off, yay! New chapter! I can't wait for chapter three. ...
May 30, 2013 -
Re: Embers of Emotions
Hello! I am so glad you are my 200th review! Let's get down to business. First off, I can really relate to this poem and I enjoyed it. You scream. ...
May 30, 2013 -
Re: What They Told Us: Chapter 1
Hello there! I am LadyPurple! Prepare your work for my review! So I will discuss the capitalization first. Then other stuff. "How have you been?" He asked, focusing his eyes ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Legion
Yeah! I will review the heck out of this! Prepare yourself! Ok, so I am LadyPurple. I wanted to talk about the structure of this. The dialouge is not supposed ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Matches To Ashes *Intro*
Hi! I am LadyPurple! Prepare to be reviewed! So, I like the concept of the this. It makes me wonder why he did this and I can tell the narrator ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: you...
Hi! I am LadyPurple and I will be reviewing your poem today! The other two reviewers beat me to two of the points I wanted to make. So I'll just ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (Chapter 2)
HI! You know, I have been meaning to read this for a while but decided it would be great Review Day material ;) ok! Onto this review! I like it. ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Sloth
Hello, darling mentee of mine! 'Tis LadyPurple to review your work! Let us begin! humans go to to be on God’s good side? You used the word 'to' too many ...
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: REM DEPRIVED: Blue Petals
Hi! I am LadyPurple! Here to review!!! I saw your reply to Methrirr down there and I wanted to say that it isn't that you're 'bad at it' it's because ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: The Unknown Planet: Chapter 1.
Hi! I'm LP here for your reviewing needs! That cold day I came home later than I normally did I walked slowly up the front porch stars and knocked on ...
Mar 31, 2013
