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LadyPurple

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: A Fresh Start

    Hi! I'm LadyPurple! I will be doing a review of your work here! The first thing I noticed about this was that the text was in a big block. This ...

    Jul 8, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Souls and their existence....

    Yo! I'm LadyPurple and I am here to drop a review! Ok so I like this essay. It's deep and thought provoking. I just have two tiny nit-picks and otherwise ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: delete please

    Hi! LadyPurple here with a review for you! The first thing I noticed is spacing. And the puncuation and the spelling (only a little). Let's use Lily to explain my ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Other » Fantasy, Horror Re: the bad dream

    Hi! I'm LadyPurple and I'm here to review you! I'm not sure if you meant for this to turn into a big block of text or have all of those ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: The Wallet

    Yo! I'm going to review you! Prepare your work!! I like the idea of this. But I think "fall" would be capitalized. Because it's the season. Crazy to think that ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: What They Told Us: Chapter 2

    Greetings! It is me, LadyPurple, here to review the second chapter of this! Yeah! WOO! Let's do this thing! First off, yay! New chapter! I can't wait for chapter three. ...

    May 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Embers of Emotions

    Hello! I am so glad you are my 200th review! Let's get down to business. First off, I can really relate to this poem and I enjoyed it. You scream. ...

    May 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: What They Told Us: Chapter 1

    Hello there! I am LadyPurple! Prepare your work for my review! So I will discuss the capitalization first. Then other stuff. "How have you been?" He asked, focusing his eyes ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Legion

    Yeah! I will review the heck out of this! Prepare yourself! Ok, so I am LadyPurple. I wanted to talk about the structure of this. The dialouge is not supposed ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Other Re: Matches To Ashes *Intro*

    Hi! I am LadyPurple! Prepare to be reviewed! So, I like the concept of the this. It makes me wonder why he did this and I can tell the narrator ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: you...

    Hi! I am LadyPurple and I will be reviewing your poem today! The other two reviewers beat me to two of the points I wanted to make. So I'll just ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Do You Remember? (Chapter 2)

    HI! You know, I have been meaning to read this for a while but decided it would be great Review Day material ;) ok! Onto this review! I like it. ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Other Re: Sloth

    Hello, darling mentee of mine! 'Tis LadyPurple to review your work! Let us begin! humans go to to be on God’s good side? You used the word 'to' too many ...

    Apr 8, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: REM DEPRIVED: Blue Petals

    Hi! I am LadyPurple! Here to review!!! I saw your reply to Methrirr down there and I wanted to say that it isn't that you're 'bad at it' it's because ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Unknown Planet: Chapter 1.

    Hi! I'm LP here for your reviewing needs! That cold day I came home later than I normally did I walked slowly up the front porch stars and knocked on ...

    Mar 31, 2013


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