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Re: I am not a monster (pt. 1/2)
Wesh! Jade here to review your work. I admit I have seen you post about this before and I know I'm a bit late to the party but here goes. ...
Jun 8, 2019 -
Re: radio silence: a love story
Wesh! Jade here to give this a quick little review. I think this was well written, deep, and honestly took my breath. The syllable count and flow stutters in places, ...
Jun 7, 2019 -
Re: It Doesn't Hurt me Anymore
Wesh! I'm Professor Jade and I'm just going to give this a quick review. Let's just go! This paints a clear picture in my head. It's pretty relatable and hard-hitting. ...
Jun 7, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 9.2
Wesh! professor Jade here to review this. I'm so sorry i haven't gotten to this sooner but I hope I'm not too late?? Anyways, you know my style.... Line by ...
Jun 6, 2019 -
Re: Tests Of All Tests
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Jun 6, 2019 -
Re: Honor
Wesh! Professor Jade here to review this really old poem. IDK how I found it but let's just go. There is No honor in the masses Without so much as ...
Jun 5, 2019 -
Re: The Throne I Chose
Wesh! So this is an OK poem. The flow is a bit off and your word choice could be better. I think you over-use phrases but I like your stye. ...
Jun 5, 2019 -
Re: disruption
Wesh! Professor Jade here to review your poem. I'm just going to give my overall thoughts on it because I'm tight on time. Let's just go! 1. The flow feels ...
Jun 3, 2019 -
Re: How I Sound
Wesh, Jade here to review. I know this is oooolllldddd but I read it and wanted to give just my overall thoughts: I love the weird format because it adds ...
Jun 3, 2019 -
Re: That's All He Is
Wesh! Professor Jade here to review. You know how it is. I know this is old but I found this in the poetry section and have decided to review it. ...
Jun 2, 2019 -
Re: My Love
Wesh! Jade here to review your poem. It's old but I found it somehow... Ok, let's go. These are my feelings. That is my answer. Please no harsh dealings. Don't ...
Jun 2, 2019 -
Re: The Stray Cat - Chapter 1
Wesh, Butterfly! I saw you posted about your story so I'm here to review it. Let's not hesitate, let's get straight to it XD XD! First of all, that cat ...
Jun 2, 2019 -
Re: "Amphetamines" - a rap
Wesh! Jade here to review your, uh, rap. I think I'll just get to it. the rage i feel inside for you is fuelled by gasoline an endless stream of ...
Jun 2, 2019 -
Re: Reflect me
Wesh! Professor Jade here to review your story. I saw you mentioned it in a post so I looked for it, I guess XD. OK, let's just begin (I'm making ...
Jun 2, 2019 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 31
Wesh! Jade here to review your work. I saw this in the green room and thought I'd give it a read. WARNING: I have not read any of your chapters ...
Jun 2, 2019