Published April 4, 2012
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Wesh! Professor Jade here to review this really old poem. IDK how I found it but let's just go.
There is
No honor in the masses
Without so much as a glimpse
I was told
This is an odd start to a poem. I like it though, it was deep, meaningful, and hooked my attention. Good work!
A shimmer spreads across the sky
A storm is brewing
Above the sea filled with lies
Let it wash over you
A tsunami
A disguise
This was way longer than the first verse. maybe make three equally lengthened paragraphs? I know this is old and youdn't care but I hope I could help.
-Professor JadeLotus-