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  • Short Story » Literature, Romantic Re: Eyes

    As soon as I finished reading this, I didn’t know whether to scream, cry, or laugh. But somehow, as I pondered on the story, it was a revelation to me ...

    Jan 23, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: It Makes Her Beautiful

    This is such an amazing piece. My heart was definitely touched by it. From my understanding, the persona was sharing of the imperfections of his “beloved” and how those imperfections ...

    Jan 23, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Behold Submission

    For something that just “came out” this was surprisingly good. But just like every single piece of writing it can still be improved. First of all, I enjoyed the story ...

    Sep 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: The Phoenix

    First of all, I salute you for attempting and achieving to write a sonnet. I personally know how difficult and tedious (at times) it is to think of words that ...

    Sep 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: You are a lovely paradise, out of reach.

    So, first of all, good job! :) Second, I would just like to echo the review @Rydia wrote and add a few of my own suggestions. 1. You have to ...

    Sep 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: falling and fallen

    There is something unique about poetry. I guess it’s the way that you can write practically anything under the sun and get your point across in even less than 500 ...

    Sep 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: S.J.H 2

    I have always enjoyed reading poetry. There is a uniqueness found in poems that cannot be found in other types of literary works. Poetry is not bound by specific a ...

    Sep 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Nocturnal Lights

    I have always enjoyed reading poetry. There is a uniqueness found in poems that cannot be found in other types of literary works. Poetry is not bound by specific a ...

    Sep 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Things Happen

    What first caught my about your story was the short synopsis you wrote. I have always been a fan of reading tragedies. There is just something about these types of ...

    Sep 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Blue

    This is one of the best stories I’ve read in quite a while. I loved the emotion you poured through your persona. This actually feels like it was just an ...

    Sep 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: driving in the passenger's seat

    I’ve always enjoyed writing and reading poetry. There is just something about poetry that is so relaxing. With the many types of poetry, I belie that free-verse is one of ...

    Sep 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Theatre Re: A Conspiracy of the Present

    Your poetry is beautifully written. As I read it, I felt as if I could clearly picture in my head the particular scenario. I could also sympathize and empathize with ...

    Sep 6, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dystopia for the Common Man

    Hi! :) So, when we hear the word dystopia we think of a world that is on the brink of destruction. We think of something like the Divergent Trilogy or ...

    Jan 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Game of Death

    Hi! :) I’ve always been a fan of poetry. I’ve always marvelled at the ways poets get their meaning across with having to be direct. I’ve always loved their use ...

    Jan 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Would it better if I did not Exist?

    Hi! :) First of all, I’d like to congratulate you on the accomplishment off finishing and publishing your first rhyming poem. From what I observed, you chose to write is ...

    Jan 11, 2016


Follow your inner moonlight; don't hide the madness
— Allen Ginsburg