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Re: Eyes
As soon as I finished reading this, I didn’t know whether to scream, cry, or laugh. But somehow, as I pondered on the story, it was a revelation to me ...
Jan 23, 2017 -
Re: It Makes Her Beautiful
This is such an amazing piece. My heart was definitely touched by it. From my understanding, the persona was sharing of the imperfections of his “beloved” and how those imperfections ...
Jan 23, 2017 -
Re: Behold Submission
For something that just “came out” this was surprisingly good. But just like every single piece of writing it can still be improved. First of all, I enjoyed the story ...
Sep 10, 2016 -
Re: The Phoenix
First of all, I salute you for attempting and achieving to write a sonnet. I personally know how difficult and tedious (at times) it is to think of words that ...
Sep 10, 2016 -
Re: You are a lovely paradise, out of reach.
So, first of all, good job! :) Second, I would just like to echo the review @Rydia wrote and add a few of my own suggestions. 1. You have to ...
Sep 9, 2016 -
Re: falling and fallen
There is something unique about poetry. I guess it’s the way that you can write practically anything under the sun and get your point across in even less than 500 ...
Sep 9, 2016 -
Re: S.J.H 2
I have always enjoyed reading poetry. There is a uniqueness found in poems that cannot be found in other types of literary works. Poetry is not bound by specific a ...
Sep 9, 2016 -
Re: Nocturnal Lights
I have always enjoyed reading poetry. There is a uniqueness found in poems that cannot be found in other types of literary works. Poetry is not bound by specific a ...
Sep 9, 2016 -
Re: Things Happen
What first caught my about your story was the short synopsis you wrote. I have always been a fan of reading tragedies. There is just something about these types of ...
Sep 8, 2016 -
Re: Blue
This is one of the best stories I’ve read in quite a while. I loved the emotion you poured through your persona. This actually feels like it was just an ...
Sep 8, 2016 -
Re: driving in the passenger's seat
I’ve always enjoyed writing and reading poetry. There is just something about poetry that is so relaxing. With the many types of poetry, I belie that free-verse is one of ...
Sep 8, 2016 -
Re: A Conspiracy of the Present
Your poetry is beautifully written. As I read it, I felt as if I could clearly picture in my head the particular scenario. I could also sympathize and empathize with ...
Sep 6, 2016 -
Re: Dystopia for the Common Man
Hi! :) So, when we hear the word dystopia we think of a world that is on the brink of destruction. We think of something like the Divergent Trilogy or ...
Jan 12, 2016 -
Re: Game of Death
Hi! :) I’ve always been a fan of poetry. I’ve always marvelled at the ways poets get their meaning across with having to be direct. I’ve always loved their use ...
Jan 12, 2016 -
Re: Would it better if I did not Exist?
Hi! :) First of all, I’d like to congratulate you on the accomplishment off finishing and publishing your first rhyming poem. From what I observed, you chose to write is ...
Jan 11, 2016
