LUNARGIRL

Hey there, Amazing job on the poem! Your writing was great, the poem had a perfect rhythm and flow. I loved how you used rhyming words like "faking, taking, making, ...

Great job on the poem! It was very funny and good. Your rhyming was great, and I really liked this part a lot, especially the end of it. "You are ...

Amazing poem! This is such a cool and creative concept, all the comparisons you have in it. Like comparing a pregnant mother with milk to the moon. Genius! It is ...

This was hilarious, but intuitive writing! It was very realistic, because there are side effects to being a writer. Keeping your sanity is not one of them. The way you ...

Hello, Really nice job! The beginning of the poem and you already tell the reader the setting! You were able to include great imagery and symbolism in the poem. Like ...

Hello, I really enjoyed this poem, even though it is the most confusing, confounding, bewildering poem I have ever read. In a good way. My favorite part was the ending ...

Hello, Great job on the script! This is a very good story that conveys a great message. The characters have to deal with real life problems, and it is very ...

Hello, This is LUNARGIRL leaving a review! I loved this poem, every stanza felt like it was from someone else's viewpoint. They all are so deep and filled with pain ...

Great job on these poems, I really liked them. They were all so different and so interesting in there own why. I really liked this one, "Who has the right ...

I can totally relate to your ramblings. was it intentional, that everything was lower case, because normally at the start of a sentence it is supposed to be capitalized. I ...

Great job on it, really liked it. 1. You had amazing descriptions throughout the chapter, not just for the characters put also where they are. I could picture all the ...

Great job on the poem, I really liked it, so I am going to dive straight into it. 1. In the beginning and throughout the poem everything is not capitalized. ...

Great job on the poem, really liked it. One thing that I love about Poetry is that it's so important because it helps us understand and appreciate the world around ...

Hi, great job on the poem. One think I have to say is that I would like more background information about what is happening, more background content. I did like ...

Great job on your poem, I liked it a lot. You had a great use of periods and commas, and I loved the beginning. It was interesting how your poem ...