Kwantack

Very well done. You might want to capatalize more words, though...

This is very well written. Thank you for using punctuation! There are so many people who seem to forget about it...I love the poem's flow. Great job and keep up ...

It's perfect in every way possible!

Then I feel sorry for you. Appearance has been greatly exaggerated over time and is now a huge problem in society and I really don't care what I look like, ...

Lovely! Truly amazing! People these days NEED to read this. I really enjoyed this. You should probably add some punctuation, though. I loved it! Keep writing!

I'm quite speechless. It's very well-written, and sounds like you put a lot of thought into this (which is something I should learn to do with my writing). And, this ...

A very unique flow, but definetely an enjoyable piece. If you've accomplished what you wanted, I say well done!

Interesting, but I'm not sure if the format of the poem is supposed to have so many I's when beginning the line. Perhaps you could make that a little clearer.

Beautiful! I love it! It's so calm and relaxed, which isn't found in many other pieces. Great job!

Hahaha this reminded me of my 8th grade weather report. It's very unique, but maybe make it a little longer.

Dude, I loved this! And it sounds like everyone else does too! Maybe add a period at the end of your last sentence, and job well done!

Intresting...very good grammar and punctuation. Vocabulary is good too.

The last line really makes the poem complete, I think. That's awesome!! It'd be really cool if you made it longer, I think as well. But it's your poem, so ...

Coolio! I think 'along' is supposed to be 'a long' but other than that, it looks great! I enjoyed reading this. Good job.

This one gave me shivers, which is a good thing. Spectacular flow and rhythm. You have a creative way with poetry. Keep up the good work and never give up!