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Re: Take a step
Tigerlilly here for a review! I love this poem! It is beautifully written, and I love how the narrator gets over their fears to follow their dreams. Its just a ...
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Re: ADDictated to WRiting
Tigerlilly here for a review! This is so true! I guess I'm an addicted writer as well. I really like the third stanza, the way you talked about the Grammar ...
Feb 3, 2015 -
Re: World Peace
Tigerlilly here for a review! Wow! This was really beautiful! I've always loved the idea of world peace, how we would all be together without judging and hurting others for ...
Feb 3, 2015 -
Re: If I Killed Myself Tonight
Hey! Tigerlilly here for a review! I can relate to this. Often I have wondered what would happen if I were to just end it. I really hope that you ...
Feb 2, 2015 -
Re: To Our End
Hello! Tigerlilly here for a quick review! Wow! This was obviously well written! The way you had the perfect balance of challenging words, the way the poem flowed together, and ...
Jan 30, 2015 -
Re: An Ode to Computer Cats
Tigerlilly here for a review! This was fairly interesting, and I honestly can say that I have never seen anything like it. I have to agree with GuyLathamzim, that this ...
Jan 30, 2015 -
Re: Detach
Hey! Tigerlilly here for a review! I'm shocked at how much meaning is in this poem, despite its short length! It's insanely expressive, and really emotional. I can only hope ...
Jan 30, 2015 -
Re: Ice
Hello! Tigerlilly here for a review! I really liked this poem! it captured the true depression of some people, and the way that while others laugh and joke, inside, that's ...
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Re: The Dog
Hey! Tigerlilly here for a review! I deeply enjoyed this! It was great, how you described how we (us dog owners) have to deal with the messes the dogs make, ...
Jan 29, 2015 -
Re: Miss spoken word.
Tigerlilly here for a review! :) WOW. This was pretty deep! I love how you illustrate how harsh people can be, how they dont even go into the details to ...
Jan 29, 2015 -
Re: Night Mares
Hello! Tigerlilly here for a review! :D First off, I can really relate to this! I often have many sleepless nights filled with nightmares and horrifying thoughts. Its quite frightening, ...
Jan 29, 2015 -
Re: Unborn Child
Hey! Tigerlilly here for a review! I LOVE this poem!!! Its so beautiful! I really love how you have the mothers perspective, then the child's perspective! It was truly amazing, ...
Jan 28, 2015 -
Re: with you
Hey! Tigerlilly here for a review! I just wanted to say that this was an excellent poem and I enjoyed it greatly. Though there are, in fact, a few problems. ...
Jan 28, 2015 -
Re: Smelly Sweaters
Hey! Tigerlilly here for a review! :) I really liked the comparison, the way thoughts are like sweaters in a cupboard. Its so true, that we always discard thoughts as ...
Jan 28, 2015 -
Re: Colors
Hey! Tigerlilly here for a review! :) I really enjoyed the imagery used in this poem! I liked the way you described each color and a meaning behind them, such ...
Jan 28, 2015
