KnightlyAngel09

Hello.:) Ok. Let's start on this. First stanza was rather confusing. The first lines were indifference but it shifted so quickly into warning then luck. I think the ideas are ...

Hello. Dark. That's what strikes me with this piece first. The thing about dark poetry is often people go too overboard with them. They use too many metaphors and descriptions ...

Hey.:) You've got a rhyme scheme going here but I think your lines are missing or having a syllable or two out of place here and there. Anyway, it needs ...

Beautiful. This very nearly made me shed tears. I have nothing to critique, I believe. First part, absolutley brilliant descriptions of nature. Imagery and personification worked well here. The way ...

Hello and welcome.:) There were some errors on grammar and spelling I noticed but the other reviewers already pointed it out.XD Honesty is a value that is sometimes difficult to ...

This rhymed really well.:) I agree with Sol. This sounded like a fantasy. It reminds me of the feelings from the Music of the Romantic Era. We studied it in ...

Hiya. And welcome here.XD My name is Nixie and I'm not a good reviewer but I shall try. I see no problem with the flow of this poem, honestly. It's ...

Hello and welcome here.:) I'm Nixie and I shall review this.XD This was a great piece. I love how it keeps you wondering until the very end. It almost seems ...

Hello.:) First thing I noticed with this is the exclamation points. I think tht it's overdone. It destroys the feel of this poem. I felt that the first part of ...

This was really good. The rhythm also really worked well with this poem. It gave it an almost desperate voice. Honestly, I see nothing wrong with this poem. Rhythm is ...

Hello.:) I see you're rather new so welcome here.:) Okay, now on to your poem. The first two stanzas I believe are supposed to be a strong beginning. Sort of ...

I love reading poems like this. They're extremely refreshing. Poems about nature I mean. Poems about emotions and other grave stuff are brilliant but they get rather heavy after a ...

Hello. You're new here, I see.:) Welcome. On to your poem: This was really cute. Although I must say it was rather cliche because it was kind of just a ...

I really loved this. It isn't your typical love poem. It could also not be a love poem. This poem goes deeper than ordinary fairy tale romance and for that ...

I recommend JANE AUSTEN. In my opinion, her best books are Pride and Prejudice and Persuasion. I also recommend Jane Eyre. If you like Tragedy, I recommend Tess of D'Urbervilles ...