I love reading poems like this. They're extremely refreshing. Poems about nature I mean. Poems about emotions and other grave stuff are brilliant but they get rather heavy after a while and poems like this one freshens everthing up.
The second stanza rhymed rather differently, I think. It didn't sound the same as the others and honestly didn't flow too great.
4th line of 4th stanza. I think there's an extra syllable there. You can drop the such and the meaning won't change at all. It'll flow better.
anyway, that's all I can say. Lovely poem.
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