KnightTeen

I'm afraid that I am a nitpicker, and here I see many grammatical mistakes. (Don't let the fact that I choose to point these out first upset you, I prefer ...

The way you wrote this work is unlike any I have seen. And I am not saying that to criticize, but to compliment you for your uniqueness. I just have ...

This was so beautiful. And I believe that your first choice of a title suites this work more than "A letter to those I left behind," mainly because while yes, ...

Let me just say first of all that this was a good piece of work. However, I didn't really understand the description and I really chose to read this based ...

Hey, HT here. Now, before I say anything else let me just point out that my French is very rusty (I voluntarily took a course a few years back) I ...

Hi, HT here to review. This was great, one of the better works that I've read so far. I particularly loved the lines: You brought me up, to bring me ...

Hey, HT here to review. I really enjoyed this particular piece of work. The rhyming pattern that you used (I have a thing for rhymes and rhyming patterns, everyone I've ...

Okay. Let's try to literally break this down. Poetry is usually written like this: A boy who's turned on to a girl, The boy's views do not match up with ...

Hey, HT here to review. First of all, I loved this. You wrote the work with perfect rhythm and flow, and I enjoyed reading it. However, I wish there was ...

I liked this poem a lot. However the line, "Beginning or the middle, now is you." rather confused me. I'm not exactly sure what you are attempting to say here, ...

First of all I would like to point out that desert is only spelled with one (S). What you're saying is: The Ant people of the Dessert. Makes e think ...

This was actually very good. Good word choice (Love the title by the way) good rhythm, good flow. The only thing wrong, at least in my opinion, is the small ...

Wow. This was amazing. It has very good flow, and a nice storyline. But, and maybe this s just me, I can't really tell what the narrator is talking about. ...

I like your style. It's choppy and halted, pausing at just the right moments to draw the readers attention to certain aspects of the work. I did however notice a ...

And for the first time, Since the first time My heart – has felt – the swirl, Of a hundred dancing butterflies This is good, however I have always been ...