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Re: .
Hi there! So, what I get from this writing is that Its about the same bullying which has been happening in almost all the Schools around the globe and Its ...
May 18, 2015 -
Re: Scarred Memories
Hi there! This is such an emotional and troublesome poem if I may say because the way you're descriptive here about whole scenario is very aptly put and Its like ...
May 18, 2015 -
Re: Sixteen
Hi there! This whole read really intensified my feelings for my expectations in life. Trust me I don't know what I looked in this read but I find it motivational. ...
May 12, 2015 -
Re: Relationship- a ship sailed by bond of emotions
Hi there! There were many punctuation mistakes but apart from that I really liked the realistic thought of this essay because from long I was thinking about writing something on ...
May 2, 2015 -
Re: Complaint to God
Hi there, I really liked the concept and well starting of this poem a lot. You've asked many questions and the way you showed your curiosity in them is great. ...
May 1, 2015 -
Re: Her Eyes
Hey there! I'm really into the romantic poems and I think this poem touched a really emotional part with in myself. You really brought out the magic in this poem ...
Apr 29, 2015 -
Re: The Traveler and The Girl
Hi there! There were some misspellings apart from that I really really liked the concept of this story it has its Aura, potential and a value but it needs some ...
Apr 29, 2015 -
Re: Where we are now
Hi there! I'm never been one to point out the mistakes so I'll just focus on the insight of your writing! Relationships drawbacks include a lot of self blaming and ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: The power of escape
Hi there! Its scary, this topic has some bonds with in it that scares me because in this generation sadness and depression are such common things that people around us ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Love Is Deeper
Hey there! I really really liked your lyrics. You're right, love can never be defined no matter how many poets and authors think they've found what actually does it mean. ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: In Protest for an Easier English
Hey there! WOW. I can simply say this only because you've perfectly shown your curiosity, questions and frustration in this passage! some of the things you've mentioned here are quite ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Many friends or fewer friends?
Hey there! Your point here is well made. Now a days half of the people will chose "few" over many and this is because we have set our minds on ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Flower
Hey there! I really liked this poem. Its one positive nature filled description of a beautiful sight a person is catching upon. I'm almost picturizing myself standing there and enjoying ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: God Stays Quiet
Hey there! This poem put me off a bit because you can not hear or converse with your God but you can definitely pray to him and trust me he ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: a part of my life
Hey there! There are little mistakes in joining of words through loop but otherwise I totally got your point! this is such a positive piece of writing. You described the ...
Apr 26, 2015
