KingQueenKnave

Hi there. I came across this poem in the Green Room, and found only one review, which surprises me because I find delight in reading this poem. I liked it, ...

Hello ChocolateCello. You may remember me, and know that I've reviewed Demons. I really enjoyed reading that piece of work. However, I did not really enjoy this one as much. ...

Hello there. I am not totally familiar with the steam punk genre, so I will focus mainly on the poem as I see it, as opposed to how it fits ...

First of all, the description on your work- i.e. "please review me please"- made me think, "oh, this better be good if the poet himself thinks it is worth my ...

This short poem caught my attention, when I noticed that the title contrasted with your closing line, to throw a spanner in the works and dice up expectations. I also ...

This poem has a lot of bite to it, a lot of sass, a lot of pessimism, and a lot of hyperbole. This can be a strength, but at times ...

Well, this poem is very miserable. That is by no means a bad thing, but a grey cloud hangs over this poem- lingering over every word with its oppressive atmosphere. ...

I came across this poem, already expecting a metaphor of drowning to sum up the feeling of isolation. My expectations were answered in the passages about being underwater, feeling "impossible ...

The element of surprise is key in poetry, especially this one. This really through me off guard. I had a feeling something was going to happen, but not *that*, per ...

Ok, let us take a look at this song. As a lyricist, I appreciate the form and the necessity of imagining music to lyrics, even if what I imagine is ...

So, I came across this poem in the Green Room. I like the title, because it's very honest and rather sweet. Introduces your character and user well, as if you're ...

A short poem can say a lot more than a meandering, endless epic, a la Rime of the Ancient Mariner. Luckily this is one of those short poems. It sets ...

This is in no way relevant to the work, but you have an epic username. I would never have been able to come up with that in a million years. ...

I like the horror genre, and I like some overly dramatic works, with hyperbolic sweeping statements and an oppressively dark atmosphere. I like it because it is fun and is ...

Another poem with a reference to drowning, yet doesn't quite have the same power and doesn't carry over the same punch. First of all, the title appears grammatically incorrect. Maybe ...