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Re: Nymphs
Hello LittleFox! I found this really really cool, knowing the mythology about nymphs. But in what I've read, they always seem to be heartless creatures that would drown just for ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Philharmonic French Doors
Hello ThereseCricket/sister! Though a bit confusing, this was kind of funny. Though I haven't the foggiest idea what philharmonic means, you portrayed your confusion well. One of my theories why ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Ode To My Significant Other
Hello sbf1102! This is beautiful! At first I thought that it was a letter to the character's husband (or wife, I make that mistake a lot.) But this is way ...
Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: Everyone was Dying but Our Love Wasn't I Think
Hello Lilas! I can't believe that you just threw this together, are you sure that you didn't think about the whole thing for a while? *Looks at with suspicion.*XD. I ...
Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: memorizer part I
Hello misschavshi! This is so cool! It's kind of creepy, but the kind that makes you want to read more, maybe even laugh at your friends pale faces after telling ...
Sep 20, 2014 -
Re: How To Fool Innocent People Online?
Hello Harry1234! Maybe you could put it in the other section... Because as said below it's not really poetry. But it's hilarious. And it's featured. And there are other ways ...
Sep 14, 2014 -
Re: Teddy Ruxpin's Mis-adventures: The Prologue
Hello Nate! This sounds pretty interesting! One thing I didn't get though: The rating. Why is it too mature? And I don't see any profanity. Just a little side note, ...
Sep 8, 2014 -
Re: Removed
Hello kayfortnight! *Has been eyeing this novel for quite some time now* So glad that I finally got to it. There are a couple typos, I can show you them ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: Silent Beauty
Hello myjaspercat! First off, nice poem! It's kind of creepy, but the sort of thing that makes you feel happy for her. Because she is at peace. I really like ...
Sep 5, 2014 -
Re: A Spark in the Cold Darkness
Hello KatyaElefant! This is beautiful. Short, and definitely sweet. Shyness... *Tries to say something about being a fellow shy person but is too shy*. I'm actually pretty shy, but no ...
Sep 4, 2014 -
Re: I Swear I Lived
Hello Defyinggravity01, There's not much I can say, except that this is beautiful. I can't say that I've ever been in love, I can't say that I've ever fallen that ...
Sep 4, 2014 -
Re: Typo Alley~C Part Two
Hello r4p17! I'm happy for you! This is in the spotlight and deserves it. By that I mean it was awesome, a whole lot better than most of the things ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: For Fortis
Hello ancientforever! I remember you talking about this in the chatroom! I didn't know you actually did it, or that you could type that fast XD! Like many sonnets, I ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: It was just a cup...
Hello Gaurav009, This is pretty sad, I had a similar idea that I will shortly be submitting for a contest. But it really is sad when something like that breaks. ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: Ordinary man
Hello skermitz, This is pretty cool. I'm not quite sure what the fire means, though I have my theories. I also keep wondering why he was gone. This is one ...
Sep 1, 2014
