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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Nymphs

    Hello LittleFox! I found this really really cool, knowing the mythology about nymphs. But in what I've read, they always seem to be heartless creatures that would drown just for ...

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: Philharmonic French Doors

    Hello ThereseCricket/sister! Though a bit confusing, this was kind of funny. Though I haven't the foggiest idea what philharmonic means, you portrayed your confusion well. One of my theories why ...

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Ode To My Significant Other

    Hello sbf1102! This is beautiful! At first I thought that it was a letter to the character's husband (or wife, I make that mistake a lot.) But this is way ...

    Sep 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Everyone was Dying but Our Love Wasn't I Think

    Hello Lilas! I can't believe that you just threw this together, are you sure that you didn't think about the whole thing for a while? *Looks at with suspicion.*XD. I ...

    Sep 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: memorizer part I

    Hello misschavshi! This is so cool! It's kind of creepy, but the kind that makes you want to read more, maybe even laugh at your friends pale faces after telling ...

    Sep 20, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: How To Fool Innocent People Online?

    Hello Harry1234! Maybe you could put it in the other section... Because as said below it's not really poetry. But it's hilarious. And it's featured. And there are other ways ...

    Sep 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Teddy Ruxpin's Mis-adventures: The Prologue

    Hello Nate! This sounds pretty interesting! One thing I didn't get though: The rating. Why is it too mature? And I don't see any profanity. Just a little side note, ...

    Sep 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Removed

    Hello kayfortnight! *Has been eyeing this novel for quite some time now* So glad that I finally got to it. There are a couple typos, I can show you them ...

    Sep 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Silent Beauty

    Hello myjaspercat! First off, nice poem! It's kind of creepy, but the sort of thing that makes you feel happy for her. Because she is at peace. I really like ...

    Sep 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: A Spark in the Cold Darkness

    Hello KatyaElefant! This is beautiful. Short, and definitely sweet. Shyness... *Tries to say something about being a fellow shy person but is too shy*. I'm actually pretty shy, but no ...

    Sep 4, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: I Swear I Lived

    Hello Defyinggravity01, There's not much I can say, except that this is beautiful. I can't say that I've ever been in love, I can't say that I've ever fallen that ...

    Sep 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~C Part Two

    Hello r4p17! I'm happy for you! This is in the spotlight and deserves it. By that I mean it was awesome, a whole lot better than most of the things ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: For Fortis

    Hello ancientforever! I remember you talking about this in the chatroom! I didn't know you actually did it, or that you could type that fast XD! Like many sonnets, I ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: It was just a cup...

    Hello Gaurav009, This is pretty sad, I had a similar idea that I will shortly be submitting for a contest. But it really is sad when something like that breaks. ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Ordinary man

    Hello skermitz, This is pretty cool. I'm not quite sure what the fire means, though I have my theories. I also keep wondering why he was gone. This is one ...

    Sep 1, 2014


It's like everyone tells a story about themselves inside their own head. Always. All the time. That story makes you what you are. We build ourselves out of that story.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind