Kelpies

Hello ancientforever! Wow! This is really, really cool! I have nothing but praise for this work. It has the feel of many fairy-tales combined, yet, it has great originality. I ...

Hello KatGirl! First off, what a great poem! I especially like the ending. I like the way you presented it, not going on forever about how bad these false faces ...

Hello SnazzyPencil! This seems like a good story you are writing, I'm pretty sure I'm going to be coming back to read the rest of the chapters. I only found ...

This was soooooooooooo funny! XD, :D :) ;) (Smilies not included; :( ) I like the whole thing, I mean it was soooooooo funny! ;). Dandruff on honeybees though?.? I'm ...

Hello Flite! I really liked this, but I couldn't think of what question he had asked. I couldn't find any errors in here, good job, not that I looked very ...

Hello ghostnthamachine! First of all: Creepy! I like horror, but not too much of it. You know, a short here and there. I couldn't find any errors. I like how ...

Hello PassionateReader! I really like this piece, you tell the reader exactly who this girl would have been. But she had never had the chance to be that person, she ...

Hello r4p17! Haha, I didn't know that RP complained! XD. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one. But, this was not without error: make a mover or not. two ...

Hello Hunger4Words! First of all, nice username! And welcome to Young Writers Society! I'm here if you have questions, I won't mind if you ask me a lot of them ...

Hello ConfusedGlasses! I like how you showed us the princesses's pasts. However, I'm not sure how it will factor into the plot much. As I said before, you use To ...

Hello ConfusedGlasses! I was just wondering... Most of your chapters end in to be continued... , is that intentional? I really like this, in here dream I guess? She sees ...

Hello ConfusedGlasses! I do agree with you that it is a relatively short chapter, but it does seem necessary. Sorry I'm late, I just figured that review day was the ...

Hello RavenLord! This is kind of creepy... In a good way though. What I don't understand is how death could forget about the boy so easily. But, then again this ...

Hello TheWriter13! I really like this, I was just counting the seconds until review day so I could review it without the guilt of not helping my teammates! XD. Anyway, ...

Hello isuki113r1! Sorry if I got your username wrong... XD. This is a really cool poem! I just don't exactly know why it's called "Carry My Heart", It just doesn't ...