Kelpies

Hello r4p17! What an odd guard! Then again, where better to study behaviour than at a prison, you can do it whilst getting paid. Anyways, quite a few nitpicks: three ...

Hello r4p17! Well, quite the horrible day Racen's having, although it makes me feel bad that she doesn't show much sadness for RP, not that it would probably make much ...

Hello r4p17! I'm glad that Wold was able to smooth things over, and that RP is making an attempt to be respectable. I think that Wold's mother-like qualities are probably ...

Hello r4p17! Woah, Racen's reaction, killing people! Then again, I know many people that would probably react that way. I am, in a way glad that Racen is making this ...

Hello r4p17! Oh wow, plot twist! But why would RP do that? He seems stubborn and a bit overbearing, but why would he create a character just to plunge another ...

Hello r4p17! I'm afraid that this review will probably be short, there is only so much praise I can pass through the chapters! RP seems to be more stubborn than ...

Hello r4p17! Here to review! First off, I thought that this was a pretty good chapter. I think that the argument between RP and Racen is quite realistic, both are ...

Hello r4p17! Hello again! Come to review Typo Alley! Again, sorry I'm really late. I thought that this was a really good chapter, although it did have a few typos. ...

Hello r4p17! I think that this chapter was pretty good. It gave some great explanations, that I know will be needed in the following chapters. There were a few unintentional ...

Hello deathwave1. This is a truly wonderful poem, it made me cry. I do have a small question; what was he diagnosed with? I was relatively curious in the poem, ...

Hello JKHatt, I really like this, it's suspenseful. It makes me want to read all the next chapters as soon as they come out, it's the perfect lead-in. I can't ...

Hello liv1997, When I was about half way through, it was melting my heart, making the end all the more potent. Some poetry about stuff like this, you don't really ...

Hello Inked! Sorry if this isn't particularly helpful, but I'll do my best by it, I'm not particularly good at reviewing. I really like the symbolism of this work, it ...

Hello r4p17! Not Katya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! D,':!!!!!!! Okay, I'm done grieving now. But I'm going to miss her. I found several typos, but I'll just point out the one that I noticed ...

Hello MargoSeuss! This is so funny! I mean, the high schoolers in my school are constantly using that word, and I bet they don't even know what it means! In ...