Kelpies

Hello Lapis! All this is quite true, but a little repetitive, you could have used a broader word choice, like "Rwaw!" or "Gaw" Either would have applied in several places. ...

Hello ConfusedGlasses, This letter... It just brings tears to my eyes. It's so much like me, and yet, so different. I know people who have a crush on me, but ...

Hello DeltaEcho, This scared me, and made me cry all in one swipe. Not that that's all a bad thing, but I almost know exactly what you mean. My brother ...

Hello CollinWitte! Nice poem! I really like it. I'm not quite sure what it really means, but it's good. I only found one place where the flow was disturbed, I'm ...

Hello Stripeslife, This poem brought tears to my eyes. I have almost no background knowledge on this subject, but the poem puts so much pain into it, I could feel ...

Hello dogsrule5! I like this poem! It reminds me of making friends when I was little... Those were the good ol' days when I could actually just say "Hello" to ...

Hi Em101cats! I like this poem, that's how I feel about any new online program on the first or second day. But for some things, it takes years to wear ...

Hello eleutheromania! This is really good! You're right, it is weird the things that waken your (and my) imagination! This is quite original, I have never seen a poem about ...

Hello Pinkiegirl13! It's a great story! Quite a few errors though, mostly words in the wrong order, nothing too bad. I can't wait to read more! And if there are ...

Hello lyleallisa26! First of all, great poem! It sort of reminded me of beauty and the beast, but then again, not. However, I do have some criticism. "He stand like ...

Hello shinobithief! I seriously had to laugh, sorry I just had to. This is so much fun! I'll bet it wasn't at the time though! Sounds like my dog... Every ...

Hello Pinkiegirl13! Much better than mine was when I wrote it! Mine had a lot to do with my pet chickens that no one understood at all why I loved ...

Hello FreddieJacobs, First off, this is beautiful. A couple typos, but it's message is clear and beautiful. It is written in such a way that I thought that the land ...

Hello rhiasophia, This had me crying, but I love a poem about fighting back. I empathize, and in my own way, sympathize. It does take a lot of courage to ...

Dear ComicalCrafty, This is so sad! It's also true, people hear so many bad things on the news, they just stop feeling for the people that died on there. This ...