Hi, lyeallissa26. This is Pinkie here for a review. Excuse me as I put on my glasses. *puts on my pink glasses.
First off, you don't have to write "by: lyeallissa26". We know that you wrote this because of the site. You don't have to repeat it.
Anyway, about the poem.
This poem seems like a good fantasy romance. You should write a story for this poem. This flow seem well and nice. You did tell us about what it is happening, but we need to see it. Maybe put some descriptions into this so we will see the main character was being attacked by wolves, and then the mysterious protector came in to save her. Also, you has some errors on here. I like to point it out for you, but other reviewers did that part. SO I leave it alone.
Overall, this is a great poem. I enjoyed this poem. I hope you write more. Well, have a nice day!
Good Job!
Cheers
Your reviewer, Pinkiegirl13
P.S: Welcome to YWS!
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