Kayley01

@Kayley01 here for review. So I think ii get the idea of your piece. You have all these words trapped inside of you trying to get out.. all your feeling ...

Wow. This pretty much describes why I love the sky so so much. @Kayley01 here for review and can I just say that you made my day with this piece. ...

Wow. That just made me think like I was at some child's birthday party and the clown had a break down... but wow that was amazing for showing your feelings. ...

Wow. Hi, @Kayley01 here for review. Wow. The start of your poem: At the start of your poem, to be honest, I was about to leave and go to a ...

Hi! @Kayley01 here for review! When I was scrolling down through the poetry section I was looking for one that rhymed. Your poem satisfied me. What really caught my eye ...

Hi @Kayley01 here for review. I liked the idea of your poem, but as I went along I got a bit confused. I think my mind just got a bit ...

Hey @Mahvash! @Kayley01 here for review! Okay so I have one criticism: When you are writing a poem, try to make up your mind. Is it going to rhyme, or ...

Hi @herbgirl, @Kayley01 here for review! I liked your poem. It was funny and unique. The title dragged me in. I thought it would be about something itching at your ...

Hey @ Charlotte2, @Kayley01 here for review. I like the idea of the poem..... But the flow was not great. For example where you said "Once I was a mermaid, ...

Hi there! @Kayley01 here for review! The title is short but suits the poem well. I think the flow of the poem is very good. I t rolls of my ...

Hey @Kayley01 here for review. Yes, you have made it very clear that you hate the poem @TheCreatorOfWorlds but I for one actually really like it. It's not actually that ...

Hi @Charlotte2, I have just seen and reviewed your poem 'I Am Death' and that got you my follow. I then proceeded to look through your other poems to see ...

Hi, @Kayley01 here for review. I have only began to use YWS a couple of days ago, and your poem is the best I've seen so far. All i can ...

Hi @Kayley01 here for review, I think this is an alright poem but you should probably try to use the correct terms for people. For example you said kid instead ...