Hi @Kayley01 here for review, I think this is an alright poem but you should probably try to use the correct terms for people. For example you said kid instead of child or Dad and Mom instead of Father or Mother. Also, if your going to make it a rhyming poem, try to make it rhyme. You said 'Dad is remarried, with a lot of things varied'. The only thing rhyming in varied and married is 'ied'. Anyway overall it is a good poem.
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