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KatyyMayy

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Kelsey

    Hello! I really like this poem! Although it is a little short, so maybe write more next time? Anyways, this poem is one of my favorites! its written nicely, and ...

    Jul 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Brain Tumor

    Hello! I've really enjoyed reading this poem! It's very lovely. The poem has a very nice flow! Anyeays, my favorite part is this 'Can't run, run and hide Or close ...

    Jul 19, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: 1812

    Hello! I've enjoyed reading this poem of yours! It's brilliant. This part is my favorite because it caught my attention the most. 'The sky fell. Everything fell. Into the dirt, ...

    Jul 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Sleepless

    Hello! I've really enjoyed reading this poem! It's one of my favorites! You're an great poet. The flow of this poem was great and easy to read. This part 'There's ...

    Jul 18, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If Random Were a Language, I Would Eat Chocolate

    Hello! This is incredibly funny! This little piece of work made my entire day. Your're a great poet! ^^ 'So then there were three potatoes, of course I call them ...

    Jul 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Entry 1 - You're On Top Of The World Again

    I find tis really interresting. The idea of your journal. It's very realistic, and classic. Although, I do have some advice. Why don't you give your readers more discription? I ...

    Jul 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: It Hurts Me For You Not To Stay

    Hello! I really enjoyed this poem. It's a masterpiece, deserves alot more credit. You're a great poet. Great grammer, excellent spelling and vocabally. Ths part is my favorite, 'It’s hard ...

    Jul 18, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: we are not/we are

    Hello! I've really enjoyed reading this poem! You're very talented. 'we are not broken. we are bent faces of spoons, our silver bodies are swans diving into another hour or ...

    Jul 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Alone

    I can easily relate to this poem. It's amazing. I can't wait to read more of your work. The poem flows easily, and you have great vocabally. 'Our time was ...

    Jul 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Wild Nowhere - Chapter 1

    Love the clift hanger! This story is really instresting. I can't wait for the next chapter. Over all, its just typos (That happens to everyone) bringing the story down. I ...

    Jul 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Gravity (Chapter One)

    I really like this story. Its really amazing! I cant wait tils the next chapter come out (: It is one of my favorites. The way you started it off ...

    Jul 18, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Humor, General Re: Abnormality Normalized

    I love your writing style! The flow is perfect, kept me really interested. 'Normal' is a huge issue and not many people realize they're being insulted. I completely agree with ...

    Jul 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Curtains of Scarlet Wind

    I love this poem. It is very interesting. One of my favorites, over all the only thing I noticed was the punctuation (Like other reviewers have noted), but that can ...

    Jul 18, 2013


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