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Re: Kelsey
Hello! I really like this poem! Although it is a little short, so maybe write more next time? Anyways, this poem is one of my favorites! its written nicely, and ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: Brain Tumor
Hello! I've really enjoyed reading this poem! It's very lovely. The poem has a very nice flow! Anyeays, my favorite part is this 'Can't run, run and hide Or close ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: 1812
Hello! I've enjoyed reading this poem of yours! It's brilliant. This part is my favorite because it caught my attention the most. 'The sky fell. Everything fell. Into the dirt, ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: Sleepless
Hello! I've really enjoyed reading this poem! It's one of my favorites! You're an great poet. The flow of this poem was great and easy to read. This part 'There's ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: If Random Were a Language, I Would Eat Chocolate
Hello! This is incredibly funny! This little piece of work made my entire day. Your're a great poet! ^^ 'So then there were three potatoes, of course I call them ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: Entry 1 - You're On Top Of The World Again
I find tis really interresting. The idea of your journal. It's very realistic, and classic. Although, I do have some advice. Why don't you give your readers more discription? I ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: It Hurts Me For You Not To Stay
Hello! I really enjoyed this poem. It's a masterpiece, deserves alot more credit. You're a great poet. Great grammer, excellent spelling and vocabally. Ths part is my favorite, 'It’s hard ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: we are not/we are
Hello! I've really enjoyed reading this poem! You're very talented. 'we are not broken. we are bent faces of spoons, our silver bodies are swans diving into another hour or ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: Alone
I can easily relate to this poem. It's amazing. I can't wait to read more of your work. The poem flows easily, and you have great vocabally. 'Our time was ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: Wild Nowhere - Chapter 1
Love the clift hanger! This story is really instresting. I can't wait for the next chapter. Over all, its just typos (That happens to everyone) bringing the story down. I ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: Gravity (Chapter One)
I really like this story. Its really amazing! I cant wait tils the next chapter come out (: It is one of my favorites. The way you started it off ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: Abnormality Normalized
I love your writing style! The flow is perfect, kept me really interested. 'Normal' is a huge issue and not many people realize they're being insulted. I completely agree with ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: Curtains of Scarlet Wind
I love this poem. It is very interesting. One of my favorites, over all the only thing I noticed was the punctuation (Like other reviewers have noted), but that can ...
Jul 18, 2013
