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Re: Prologue
Hello, haylesbales. I really love the wording of the poem. There are words in there that I never seen before, so that's a plus! I agree with @Aurora99... I am ...
Jan 11, 2014 -
Re: The Curious Romances of Edmund Sullivan
Hello, Silverlock. Well, this story has got me questioning myself. I was somewhat confused at first but I got the meaning to it at the end of the story. I ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: The Fading - Chapter One
Hello, Roundsquare. I am here to review as you requested c: Well, first off, love the story so far. I think it was a very interesting story to read. Second ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Beginnings
Hello, fictional. How are you? Me? I am okays. The name's Kanome. And I am here to review for you~ Well, first of all, the lining in the poem is ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: Fatewriter - Prologue
Hello, TriSARAHtops. Kanome here, ready to review! x3 First of all, I love the beginning of the story. It really captured my attention greatly. I liked the imagery in the ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: Insanity
Hello, MysteryMe. I love the first line of this poem. It captured my heart when I read it. When I read the last two lines of the poem, I was ...
Jan 5, 2014 -
Re: Off the Edge
Hello, RainGrae. This story was very interesting to me. I love the imagery and the two characters in the story. The girl really did seem depressed about something when i ...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: In the beginning of the story,
Hello, InTheTrees! Well, first of all, this is a very interesting poem you made here. I love the imagery and details of the poem. I can honestly see this happening ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: I . Alice. Falling. [prologue]
Hello, Ravaien. When I first saw the title, it reminded me of Alice in Wonderland but oddly enough, the clock ticking and all did remind of me of it. I ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: When in Doubt, always choose 'C.'
Hello, fortis. I must say, this poem is surprisingly short but big on words. I honestly would've chose B because I just fear myself at times. I don't know why ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: 《TRUST ME》
Hello, maryanne. Ohmegawd, I am flipping out because of how it ended xD I honestly want to know what happened in the end but you left a lot of suspense ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Ten Things I Know About Love
Hello, Sunshine. I really love this poem because it speaks about you personally. You have true guts if you're able to write a poem about yourself and your life. My ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Release
Hello, ConverseFireGirl. This poem was really saddening to me... the fact that the girl committed suicide made my heart sank. I am pretty sure most girls (or guys) had their ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: I Remember
Hello, MoIIylouise. c: well, first of all, I like this poem very much. It's only because that's how I feel about some of my friends at the moment. I like ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: An Angel Came
Hello, Emotion1405. -Tears up from this wonderful piece of work- This poem had made me cry for real. I honestly love this poem because right now, someone rescued me from ...
Dec 29, 2013
