KaiTheGreater

*Cries* Well then. Okay. I'll try to put sentiments aside for a moment.... "Ever since I was a little girl" and "The very next day" don't really match up. I ...

That was beautiful! Well done! I love this poem!! I love the lines "everyone but time has forgotten." That to me was just so meaningful. It made me sad to ...

I love this poem. It's so deep and meaningful. It really reflects the common feeling of always being too far away from reality. The world is a really big place, ...

Hello EscapeToNeverland, I'm not much of a reviewer, but I'll try! I'm better at grammar and and spelling than plot and stuff, so this isn't going to be a sparkling ...

Hello, Peace! I'm here to help your poem with a few spelling and grammar errors. First, in the seventh line, you said, "So I had to got and fetch the ...

I like this poem. It's sad, but also beautiful. I like that you ended it on a happy note. I also like how each line is short, because that kind ...

Palindrome.

I like this! :) One thing, though, the 'So I' in the third stanza isn't in bold print. I think it was really cool how you did that (I mean ...

Great poem! It just needs a little bit of grammatical spiffing up, which is my specialty. ;) "so i Fight this tide," - That should be a capitol i, and ...

Interesting poem. I'm not really into romance, but as far as I can tell (which isn't very far) it looks good, for what it is. Just a few grammatical and ...

This is a great poem, but it needs a little spiffing up, grammar-wise. End of the first line, comma End of the second line, question mark Second line, you need ...

This is a good poem, though a little confusing at times. In the second stanza, "loose" should be "lose", I think. And I don't think "broke" is a word, at ...

I like this poem a lot. It's sad, but realistic. Promises are often the only thing we have left of a friend, and if you're not careful the world can ...