KLovelace

Hello, my name is K and hopefully my review will be helpful to you c: Overall, this was a beautiful poem. i don't even know how to criticize it. I ...

Hi, I'm K and hopefully this review will be helpful to you! My first comment is that you use the word "he," quite a bit, and as I read I ...

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Hi, I'm K and hopefully this review will be helpful! Let me just say, I really loved this poem. It reminds me a little of my past, so I could ...

Hi, my name is K and hopefully this review will be helpful! My first comments are going to be about the overall poem as a whole. To me, it seemed ...

I know it's probably easiest to write angsty poetry, but this one is really heavy and actually made me little depressed to read, which I don't think should be your ...

Oh, I really love this poem! The first line really captures the mood and instantly gives the reader a sense of it. I especially love your use of the word ...

I like the story you're telling here, especially because I am a huge fan of cats myself. This poem could use a little work, though. There's no real rhythm or ...

I like this. The first stanza is perfect, the amount of syllables and word choice go perfectly with each other. This makes a very strong beginning. The second stanza isn't ...

Hm, okay. I like what you're trying to say here, and I like the emotions that are present. But like a previous reviewer wrote, I ended up just skipping the ...

Wow, this is so beautiful. I love love love the story you're telling here, and I feel like a lot of people could relate to it. You have a really ...

This poem interests me :o It has no real scheme or rhythm, yet is still really pleasant to read. I like the story you're telling and how you tell it- ...

Whoa o.o This poem has such amazing imagery. That's the most important comment cx And I actually really loved the contrasting sides of addiction, and how you used the italics ...

Hm... Overall, I really like this poem. The only thing that I could offer as criticism was your lack of a true rhythm. It felt, to me, like the poem ...

I love this poem, it's amazing. You should definitely keep writing. The first time I read it, all I did was read. The second time though, I decided to sing ...