KFdreams02

This is a very powerful poem. But, before we talk about the emotions in it, let me get the reviewing out of the way... Your "rhythm" in it is pretty ...

I love the heart and soul that you have put into this work. It paints a very vivid picture, which in my opinion, is a characteristic that poetry should always ...

I can understand what the poem means. Huge props for that! The syllable count is a bit jagged on some of the lines, and this causes the flow to come ...

Where do I begin... Let's just say this story has me crying. This really hit home for me, like all the way. Having a dad just like this, I could ...

Okay, so there are a few things that I didn't particularly like about your rhyming style, but as always, I do not hold the opinion of everyone, and some may ...

So, I really like the flow in this story and the way you describe and paint the picture. I can see this being an amazing spoken word piece. Anyways, the ...

I know how you feel when it comes to stuff like this, though for different reasons. I meet a lot of people, online and in person, and I always end ...

Wow! This drawing is absolutely amazing coming from my point of view cause I can't draw hands or feet very well. There are a few parts that could use some ...

First of all I'd like to say bravo. I don't think I would have made it this far without drawing a blank (I write poetry and am working on a ...

What's up?! I can definitely feel the depth in this poem when it comes to the emotions. Job well done! There were a few lines that were either too short ...

To be totally and completely honest with you, I almost stopped reading it. Not because you didn't do a good a job (I believe it was executed amazingly), but more ...

What's up?! I just wanted to say that it is very nice poem, and it suits my personality awesomely (probably why I love it so much). It's short and sweet, ...

Hello! I love the emotional depth of this poem. It could use a little more rhythm to it, but all in all, I enjoyed it greatly. I understand that I'm ...

This kinda got to me. You definitely have a way with emotions my friend. I have some daddy issues so that's probably why. I think you did an amazing job ...

I'm bot seeing the connection between the title and the story. It's a little confusing honestly. Maybe if you could explain the connection, and maybe what the poem is about. ...